ak nayi ummid......

by devika singh rajpoot on October 28, 2014, 01:50:01 PM
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aaj ek nayi ummid se rub ru hui
ek naye raaste se mulakuat hui
milegi ek nayi manzil iss raah par
yahi soch kar hassi hlabono pe khili hui.....

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«Reply #1 on: October 28, 2014, 02:34:06 PM »
Devika ji Adab..

bahut achchhi koshish rahi.. kuchh guzarish karna chahenge ... plzz dont mind

Apke kuchh lafz aap message ki tarah type kar dete haiN maslan 'Kar' ko ap kr likh dete haiN

Shayari achchhi hoti hai par wo lutf nahi aata...

Kuchh aur jaise aapne Nayi likhna tha (New) par aapnr nai likh diya..

ek bar aap jarur dekh lena..
agar bura lage to mafi ka talabgar hun.


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«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2014, 09:00:47 PM »
aaj ek nayi ummid se rub ru hui
ek naye raaste se mulakuat hui
milegi ek nayi manzil iss raah par
yahi soch kar hassi phir labono pe khil gayi.....

devika singh

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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2014, 08:02:27 AM »
खूब कहा.....

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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2014, 09:20:01 AM »
nice
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