deewaani hoon main...uski...

by deewaani on February 04, 2009, 07:47:16 PM
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kitna dard hai dil main, hamaray siva koun jaanay
humaaray jo naseeb hain, Khuda k siva koun jaanay
aitbaar unpar kiya tha khudsay zyaadah
hum unko kitna chahtay hain, woh bewafa kya jaanay


Assalamu Alaykum

ek shaayira aapki mehfil mai haazari dy rehi hai
itni advanced shaayira nahin hoon, iss liyay plz be nice with criticisms, lol

Unki,

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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2009, 08:02:43 PM »
Welcome To Yoindia Deewaani Ji,.

Yoindia Dil-o-Jaan Se Aapka Istakhbaal Karta Hai,.
Inshallah Aapko Yahaan Ruswaai Nahi Milegi, Khush Raho,.
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«Reply #2 on: February 06, 2009, 04:31:59 PM »
kitna dard hai dil main, hamaray siva koun jaanay
humaaray jo naseeb hain, Khuda k siva koun jaanay
aitbaar unpar kiya tha khudsay zyaadah
hum unko kitna chahtay hain, woh bewafa kya jaanay


Assalamu Alaykum

ek shaayira aapki mehfil mai haazari dy rehi hai
itni advanced shaayira nahin hoon, iss liyay plz be nice with criticisms, lol

Unki,

deewaani

Swagat hai aapko YoIndia mein Deewaani sis

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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: February 06, 2009, 04:36:34 PM »
kitna dard hai dil main, hamaray siva koun jaanay
humaaray jo naseeb hain, Khuda k siva koun jaanay
aitbaar unpar kiya tha khudsay zyaadah
hum unko kitna chahtay hain, woh bewafa kya jaanay



Jo hai Bewafa, us se Ijhaar kaya
Jo na hua apna, us se Ikraar kaya
Dard hai apne Moh se, yah samjh le agar ho sake
Bin kisi Moh ke, dunia main Dard hai kaya!!


Apka Yoindia main Hardik Sawagat hai!!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2009, 06:16:01 AM »
Deewani ka khairmakhdam hai
aur deewangee ka intezaar



javed
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2009, 01:48:26 PM »
thank you all

khush rahiyay
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2009, 01:58:28 PM »
May Allah Bless you Too,.
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«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2009, 02:11:33 PM »
Welcome Deewani......

Ghayel se kabhi zakhmo ka tazkira nahi karna
JItna hain kafi hain aur uske Dard me izafa nahi karna

                    -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #8 on: February 18, 2009, 04:51:42 PM »
hello
hello, dont wory critisim is always good.makes you a stronger person.hope you have setteled in.its always hard the 1st few days.
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