Hello dosto...

by Ritesh Modi on September 11, 2012, 01:27:26 PM
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Hello Dosto,
I am Ritesh aur mei yoinida ka naya member hu..
Mei Bangalore sehar se hu aur meri umar 32 saal hai...
Koshish karta hu kuch likhne ki lekin koi shayar wali baat nahi mujh mein.


Hu hawa ka jhonka, khusbu bhi laya aur laya bahaar bhi,
Chirag dil ke jalaye, laya hu roushani ki bouchhar bhi,
Kisi ke gam uthaye toh kisi se baanti khushi bhi,
Hai dil bekara thoda toh hai thoda karaar bhi….

Dosto mera maan pasand vishay waise toh Dard aur Bewafai hai lekin koshish karta hu har pehlu pe likhu...


Dard hai jaan meri, dard hi daastan meri,
Dard se hoti shuru aur dard pe khatam pehchan meri..

Kaafi sunta bhi hu jaise Mehdi Hassan aur mere favorite shayar Bashir badr sahab hai....
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2012, 01:47:34 PM »
wah waH..aap sach me bahaar le ke aye hain..welcome to yoindia, apki poems aur shayari ka besabri se intezaar rahega
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Ritesh Modi
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2012, 02:06:48 PM »
Thank you jald hi kuch pesh karunga....
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suman59
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2012, 03:00:52 PM »
Wah wah badiya introduction. welcome here ritesh jee.
aapka likha padne k liye hum bhi hai line mein.

Khush rahiye
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Ritesh Modi
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2012, 03:57:34 PM »
suman ji likh diya hai...shuruwad kar di..aagaaz kiya hai dekho anjaam kya hota hai happy3
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BANSI DHAMEJA
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2012, 04:06:49 PM »
WELCOME Ritesh Modi ji
Pyaar pe likho ya Mohabat pe llikho
Dard pe likho ya Wafa pe likho
Ya ibaadat pe likho ya kisi aur pahloo pe likho
Magar likho aur likhte taho aur likhte raho
Parhte raho parhaate raho aur aabaad raho
 bansi(madhur)
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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2012, 04:07:25 PM »
Quote from: Ritesh Modi on September 11, 2012, 03:57:34 PM
suman ji likh diya hai...shuruwad kar di..aagaaz kiya hai dekho anjaam kya hota hai happy3

anjaam badiya hi hoga ritesh jee. humne aapka likha sab pada aur hame bahut acha laga. yu hi bahut bahut achi achi kavitaye likhiyega zarur aur hum padenge bi zarur  Usual Smile
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Ritesh Modi
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2012, 04:09:21 PM »
Bansi ji koshish karta rahunga...
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Ritesh Modi
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2012, 04:12:50 PM »
suman ji hamare dost anmolji ne ye site recommend ki thi aur lag raha hai ki wo sahi the...thank you housla afzai ke liye...
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2012, 04:14:32 PM »
Quote from: Ritesh Modi on September 11, 2012, 04:12:50 PM
suman ji hamare dost anmolji ne ye site recommend ki thi aur lag raha hai ki wo sahi the...thank you housla afzai ke liye...

aap ko yahan laye anmol jee hum unka shukraguzar hai.

khush rahiye god bless
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Ritesh Modi
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«Reply #10 on: September 11, 2012, 04:16:19 PM »
ji bilkul anmol ji laaye mujhe...
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BANSI DHAMEJA
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2012, 04:19:25 PM »
Quote from: Ritesh Modi on September 11, 2012, 04:09:21 PM
Bansi ji koshish karta rahunga...
Koshish karte rahiye.
God bless you
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«Reply #12 on: September 11, 2012, 04:21:34 PM »
thank you aap logo ka, aaj ke liye alvida...kal phir milte hai...good night..
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«Reply #13 on: September 11, 2012, 05:40:52 PM »
Ritesh ji.. A very warm Welcome to Yoindia family... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: September 11, 2012, 06:22:39 PM »
Quote from: Ritesh Modi on September 11, 2012, 01:27:26 PM
Hello Dosto,
I am Ritesh aur mei yoinida ka naya member hu..
Mei Bangalore sehar se hu aur meri umar 32 saal hai...
Koshish karta hu kuch likhne ki lekin koi shayar wali baat nahi mujh mein.


Hu hawa ka jhonka, khusbu bhi laya aur laya bahaar bhi,
Chirag dil ke jalaye, laya hu roushani ki bouchhar bhi,
Kisi ke gam uthaye toh kisi se baanti khushi bhi,
Hai dil bekara thoda toh hai thoda karaar bhi….

Dosto mera maan pasand vishay waise toh Dard aur Bewafai hai lekin koshish karta hu har pehlu pe likhu...


Dard hai jaan meri, dard hi daastan meri,
Dard se hoti shuru aur dard pe khatam pehchan meri..

Kaafi sunta bhi hu jaise Mehdi Hassan aur mere favorite shayar Bashir badr sahab hai....



                     welcome ritesh ji. Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile


                   
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