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Bechain Dhadkan
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Mera naam Piya hai.
Mujhe ye sher-o-shayri ki duniya kbhi bakvaas lga krti thi~~
mai sochti thi ki ye shayriyaan bs khwaabon ki dunia me rkhti hain~~
scchai se inka kya talluk?
"Only hyperbole!"
lekin ab aisa nhi hai.Dard bhre shayri mere dil ko cheer k rkh dete hain~~
Dhadkane bechaini si mehsoos krti hain.
Mai chaati hoon ki ab mai b likhun
wo sb jo mehsoos krti hoon~~
kya aap log shamil karenge mujhe apni is khoobsurat si dunia me?
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2012, 01:49:02 PM » |
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Hello Piya
Dard hi Nahi Mohabbat se bhi rista jodna padega
You are most welcome Dear !!!
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2012, 02:07:49 PM » |
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Mera naam Piya hai.
Mujhe ye sher-o-shayri ki duniya kbhi bakvaas lga krti thi~~
mai sochti thi ki ye shayriyaan bs khwaabon ki dunia me rkhti hain~~
scchai se inka kya talluk?
"Only hyperbole!"
lekin ab aisa nhi hai.Dard bhre shayri mere dil ko cheer k rkh dete hain~~
Dhadkane bechaini si mehsoos krti hain.
Mai chaati hoon ki ab mai b likhun
wo sb jo mehsoos krti hoon~~
kya aap log shamil karenge mujhe apni is khoobsurat si dunia me?
hi piya.
Sister u r most welcome in our yoindia family.
Aap likhna suro to kijiye.
Aapka ye bhai aapki poetry jaroor parega or hamara sara yoindia family pariwar aapko pasand karega.
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sksaini4
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2012, 02:38:31 PM » |
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MOST WELCOME BETA YE PINK COLOR MEN PADHAA NAHEEN JAATAA KUCHH AUR COLOR USE KARO GOD BLESS YOU
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~Hriday~
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2012, 02:46:19 PM » |
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Hello Priya ji,
aap likhna shuru kijiye hum aapka likha dil se padhenge... kuch bhi aaye dil me likh daaliye... chaahe dard ho, yaadein ho ya mohabbat ho... bas dil ki har baat ko likh lijiye... likh lene se dil halka hota hai...!!!
Take care
Hriday
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Bechain Dhadkan
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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2012, 02:21:28 AM » |
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Aap logon ne hausla bdhaya hai mera~~
thanks
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Parvana shan
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2012, 02:32:18 AM » |
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Hi piya.
Tumhara dil lagta h kisi ne tor diya h.
Or mera bhi tuta hua h.
Yaar dono ki khoob jamegi.
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Bechain Dhadkan
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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2012, 02:47:36 AM » |
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Koi dil tod de, bewfa ho jaye, iljaam de, khfa ho jaye to sayad itni uljhan na rehti
lekin jb koi aziz shakh bina kuch kahe chupchaap chor jaye to kaisa lgta hai?
Mere liye to ye maut jaisa hai.
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Parvana shan
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2012, 02:52:18 AM » |
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To kya hua jaan maut ko hi jee kr dekhu bhut maza aayega.
Tumhe ak ummid to h ki tumhara dilbar laut aayega.
Yha to wo bhi nhi h.
Ham to maut ko jee kr dekh rahe h.
Aap bhi dekho
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Bechain Dhadkan
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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2012, 02:57:54 AM » |
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Ji rhi hoon mai
k maut meharbaan jo nhi hoti
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Parvana shan
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«Reply #10 on: April 05, 2012, 03:03:55 AM » |
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Maut ki chah karogi to maut nhi aayegi.
Wese bhi ak sakhas ke chale jaane se jidagi nhi rokti.
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Aapko apne liye nhi to apne apno ke liye khush rahna parega.
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Maa baap , bhai bahan bhut praye risto h.
Jo kabhi bewafa nhi hote.
Ense dil lgao .
Khusiya aa hi jayegi.
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M to ye janta hu ki khud ko fareb me mubtila karke apno ke liye hasna muskil jaroor h.
Par na mumkin nahi.
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Ummid h aap apni mammi se pyar karti hogi.
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sarfira
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«Reply #11 on: April 05, 2012, 03:04:36 AM » |
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welcome to Yoindia Shayariadab
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Bechain Dhadkan
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«Reply #12 on: April 05, 2012, 03:12:51 AM » |
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"Maa"
kaisi hoti hain ye?
Kya Bahut pyar krti hain ye?
Sbse jada?
Mujhe to andaza hi nhi
hosh sambhala to maa nhi thi...
'NAI MAA' jo mujhe~~
jane dijiye
kuch nhi
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Parvana shan
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«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2012, 03:21:13 AM » |
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Oh sunkar bhut dukh huaa.
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Kash aapki maa hoti to aaj aap etna tanha na mahsoos karti.
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Fir bhi aapko jeena to seekhna hi hoga.
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Jaba wo aapse bicharkr muskura sakta h to aap kiyo nhi.
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Jitna uske baare me sochogi gam hi milega.
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Kisi se uske bare me bhut si bate kar le dil halka jaroor ho jayega.
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M bhi aaj tak uski baate kisi se kahne ke liye kisi ki talash me hu par kisi se bta nhi pata.
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Par m khush hu or dekhu musrura rha hu.
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Aap bhi muskuraye naa.
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Aapki muskurahat bhut khobbbsurat hogi.
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Use apne honto pe aane do.
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Parvana shan
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«Reply #14 on: April 05, 2012, 03:24:11 AM » |
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Or maa sabse achchi dost hoti h.
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Mujhe to jab bhi jyada gam hota h.
Maa ki god me let jata hu.
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Or gam pata hi nhi chalte kha chale jaate h.
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Bhut sukoon milta h maa ki god me.
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