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Kaas ham aik kitaab hi hote...

by deepraghav on April 04, 2014, 04:12:01 PM

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"Mujhko aik kitaab ki tarah pada usne...dekha mere chahre ko der tak...vark ke maaniend...Har harff..har lafz..har alfaaz...jo meri jindgi ke udaas lamhe the...uski lamas-e-najron se...noor huye phir be-noor ho gaye...Palta tha usne...meri hasraton ko...padke... page ki tarah...rakhke apne seine pe...wo nazneena ...so gayi...kho gayi...kinhien khwaabon me...KAASH HAM AIK KITAAB HI HOTE DEEP"


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Re: Kaas ham aik kitaab hi hote...

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Re: Kaas ham aik kitaab hi hote...

«Reply #2 on: April 04, 2014, 04:27:52 PM »

Quote from: deepraghav on April 04, 2014, 04:12:01 PM

दीप राघब जी,

बहुत अच्छी रचना पेश की है आपने. बहुत पसंद आयी. एक मेरा सुझाब मान लें, हेर शेर को अलग अलग लाइन्स में पैरवाईज़ लिखे तो बेहतर तथा प्रभावी होगा.