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by kavyanshi on April 07, 2014, 10:38:08 PM
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SIR,
I AM ALKA GUPTA KAVYANSHI,STUDENT OF B.Sc. botany (hons)III YEAR, OF BHU UNIVERSITY . I USED TO WRITE POEMS IN HINDI LANGUAGE.SO I AM POSTING ONE OF THEM ,PLZ GIYE ME YOUR FEEDBACK ,,,,,IT WILL BE VERY MUCH INSPIRING FOR ME...

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MERI AATMA ME SANSKAR KA DEEPAK JALAKAR
MERA ANTANMAN UJJAWAL KAR DIYA..

AAKHIRKAAR KIS SHABD ME
 UNKA PREM SEEMIT KAR DU ...?

JISNE APNE PREM SE
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UMRA BADALI PARIVESH BADALA
PARANTU KUCHH 'KUCHH 'H MAA KE PYAR ME
JO KABHI NHI BADALA....

ALKA GUPTA KAVYANSHI
 
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2014, 11:45:50 PM »
aapkaa bahut bahut swagat hai aapkee rachnaa bhee bahut achhee hai keep it up bitiya rani god bless u
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2014, 11:47:05 PM »
JISNE HAR TAPISH ME
APNE AANCHAL SE SHITALTA DIYA...

MERI AATMA ME SANSKAR KA DEEPAK JALAKAR
MERA ANTANMAN UJJAWAL KAR DIYA..

AAKHIRKAAR KIS SHABD ME
 UNKA PREM SEEMIT KAR DU ...?

JISNE APNE PREM SE
 MERI SAANSO KO MAHAKA DIYA..

UMRA BADALI PARIVESH BADALA
PARANTU KUCHH 'KUCHH 'H MAA KE PYAR ME
JO KABHI NHI BADALA....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
wah wah bohut khub alka keep writing
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2014, 12:16:40 AM »
SIR,
I AM ALKA GUPTA KAVYANSHI,STUDENT OF B.Sc. botany (hons)III YEAR, OF BHU UNIVERSITY . I USED TO WRITE POEMS IN HINDI LANGUAGE.SO I AM POSTING ONE OF THEM ,PLZ GIYE ME YOUR FEEDBACK ,,,,,IT WILL BE VERY MUCH INSPIRING FOR ME...

JISNE HAR TAPISH ME
APNE AANCHAL SE SHITALTA DIYA...

MERI AATMA ME SANSKAR KA DEEPAK JALAKAR
MERA ANTANMAN UJJAWAL KAR DIYA..

AAKHIRKAAR KIS SHABD ME
 UNKA PREM SEEMIT KAR DU ...?

JISNE APNE PREM SE
 MERI SAANSO KO MAHAKA DIYA..

UMRA BADALI PARIVESH BADALA
PARANTU KUCHH 'KUCHH 'H MAA KE PYAR ME
JO KABHI NHI BADALA....

ALKA GUPTA KAVYANSHI
 

gr8888888888888 ma'am
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2014, 02:03:43 PM »
Welcome Banner to yoindia ,, Nice and keep writing

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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2014, 09:45:45 PM »
thanx to all of you sir..........thanq
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