my intro and one poem--Dr.Ammarah- the poor soul

by dr.ammarax on February 04, 2011, 10:24:22 PM
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AslamUAlaikum,
Dr.Ammarah here

i m sharing a poem, i received a prize for . in a mushiara competetion .. the topic was bahar.
the judges were Rana SAEED doshi, dr sajida bano and one else i m foegtting the name.

give feeback!

Hua char dang aalam mei charcha k bahaar aae
Shayd ye dunya bahar ka matlab NA SAMAJH paee


YE BAHAAR nahi k nafsa nafsi ho har jaa
ho na ghumkhuwar,na koi karay maseehaa'i

DhamakAY HEIN kahin to kahin HAI Qatl e momin
Phir qatil BHE smjhy keh milygi AB pazeera'i

Aaqal e khaam apni aur dawah geeri payambar per
Keh jihad ki bat USS NABI ne hamy bAtLaee

Maqrooz apni khaak ka,khak kary ga khudkushi
na kyu ye ramz inhen kisi ne samjhae

Chasm e aalam se tou lakh chup jae koi
Khuda dekhta hay,nahi ghafil uski kibriaee.

Sub ik sans se jeetay hon mohabbat k gehwaray mein
Koi na ksi ka hasid ho,na karay buraaee


har soo ho pyar,mohabbat, aman o aashti ki bat
Tub mein kahun Ammara,aaj aalam mei bahar aee.

Ammarah!
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ANAAM
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2011, 01:30:18 AM »
Very good poem Ammarah ji......specially last four lines tou dil mai uttar gayee..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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Aapki aur rachnaayein padhne ka maukaa milega yahi tammanaa....... icon_king
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dr.ammarax
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2011, 01:54:47 AM »
thankyou so much anaam Usual Smile thanx for the appreciation Usual Smile
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nirala
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2011, 03:01:06 AM »
Sir ji mere liye jara muskil tha samjhna par wakai bahut lajawaab poetry aapki.
aapka ab intezar rahega.
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thanx
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2011, 03:28:55 AM »
Quote from: dr.ammarax on February 04, 2011, 10:24:22 PM
AslamUAlaikum,
Dr.Ammarah here

i m sharing a poem, i received a prize for . in a mushiara competetion .. the topic was bahar.
the judges were Rana SAEED doshi, dr sajida bano and one else i m foegtting the name.

give feeback!

Hua char dang aalam mei charcha k bahaar aae
Shayd ye dunya bahar ka matlab NA SAMAJH paee


YE BAHAAR nahi k nafsa nafsi ho har jaa
ho na ghumkhuwar,na koi karay maseehaa'i

DhamakAY HEIN kahin to kahin HAI Qatl e momin
Phir qatil BHE smjhy keh milygi AB pazeera'i

Aaqal e khaam apni aur dawah geeri payambar per
Keh jihad ki bat USS NABI ne hamy bAtLaee

Maqrooz apni khaak ka,khak kary ga khudkushi
na kyu ye ramz inhen kisi ne samjhae

Chasm e aalam se tou lakh chup jae koi
Khuda dekhta hay,nahi ghafil uski kibriaee.

Sub ik sans se jeetay hon mohabbat k gehwaray mein
Koi na ksi ka hasid ho,na karay buraaee


har soo ho pyar,mohabbat, aman o aashti ki bat
Tub mein kahun Ammara,aaj aalam mei bahar aee.

Ammarah!

Very Nice Poetry .... Dr.Ammarah Ji !

dil se daad !!!!!!!
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manjum
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2011, 05:30:35 AM »
wah wah Ammarahji... bahut khub

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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2011, 06:04:00 AM »
very very nice...dher saari daad~
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2011, 07:22:02 AM »
Dr Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah aapki is nazm ke khayaal aur bayaani behad khoob rahi..
Waqai aik umdaa nazm se aapne, bazm ko nawaaza hai.... Usual Smile

Aapka is YOINDIA ki mehfil meiN isteqbal hai...

Aapki yeh nazm waqai dil daad ki mushtahiq hai..
Dil se daad kabool kijiye...

Quote from: dr.ammarax on February 04, 2011, 10:24:22 PM
AslamUAlaikum,
Dr.Ammarah here

i m sharing a poem, i received a prize for . in a mushiara competetion .. the topic was bahar.
the judges were Rana SAEED doshi, dr sajida bano and one else i m foegtting the name.

give feeback!

Hua char dang aalam mei charcha k bahaar aae
Shayd ye dunya bahar ka matlab NA SAMAJH paee


YE BAHAAR nahi k nafsa nafsi ho har jaa
ho na ghumkhuwar,na koi karay maseehaa'i

DhamakAY HEIN kahin to kahin HAI Qatl e momin
Phir qatil BHE smjhy keh milygi AB pazeera'i

Aaqal e khaam apni aur dawah geeri payambar per
Keh jihad ki bat USS NABI ne hamy bAtLaee

Maqrooz apni khaak ka,khak kary ga khudkushi
na kyu ye ramz inhen kisi ne samjhae

Chasm e aalam se tou lakh chup jae koi
Khuda dekhta hay,nahi ghafil uski kibriaee.

Sub ik sans se jeetay hon mohabbat k gehwaray mein
Koi na ksi ka hasid ho,na karay buraaee


har soo ho pyar,mohabbat, aman o aashti ki bat
Tub mein kahun Ammara,aaj aalam mei bahar aee.

Ammarah!

Bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Aise hi khob kalaam se hum sab ko ru be ru karate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2011, 07:42:59 AM »
dr. sahab welcome on yoindia......

aapki peshkash behad shandaar rahi........esi peshkash ko inaam milna bilkul wajib he........

ese hi yaha sabko aachi aachi peshkash dete rahiye aur isi tarah khubsuart likhty rahiye........

once again welcome
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2011, 09:26:36 AM »
welcome to YOINDIA pariwar Dr Ammarah ji....

ek behad hi umdaaa aur khubsurat nazm likhi hai aapne..iske liye to inaam k haqdaar bante i hain aap...hamari taraf se bht sari badhaiyan iss khubsurat nazm k liye...yunhi likhte rahiye aur dil lubhate rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2011, 11:04:39 AM »
Koyal ki kuhu-kuhu karti hai Yoindia parivaar mai aapka swaagat...
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2011, 06:21:21 PM »
thankyou all above. i just cant imagine, itnay logon nay reply kya hay aur meri poem ko itna pasand kya ha Usual Smile
thankyou all for a warm welcome :D
thanks again!
Love!
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