Competition for the Month of Sept.09 On nazm

ji aapki baat samaj me yeh aai ki muje home page par se kuch poems ya jokes etc padhne honge. thik samja ne maine? lekin maine jo mail bhejein hain support par javed sahab ke naam unka koi jawab kyun nahin aa raha?

javed sahab mere mail ka jawab to dijiye. maine do baar support par aap ke naam mail bhejein hain

Taseer SAhab

Adaab

Main kuch ziyada busy tha aaj aap ka yahan Msg dekha jawab de raha hun , mujhe zati aap ka koi msn nahin mila na pm na email per
aap ager pm mein post nahin ker pa rahe hain to yahn post ker dain main yahan se usko shamil ker loonga , bhai khafgi ki kia baat hai.
Aap mujhe Email ker dain ya phir se PM ker ke jo pochna ho basad shauq pochain meri khush naseebi ho gee ke main kuch aap ke sawalat ka jawab de sakoon.

main mazarat chahunga jo aap ko zahmat uthani padi . abhi tak is msg. ke alawa aap ka koi masg nahin mila




Rishi ji Adaab

aap zaroor apni nazm arsaan yanibhaijain yeh competition aap sab ke liye hi hai. aap IAdmin ne jo Pm ka tareeqa bataya hai usper bhiaj dain nahin to mujhko pm ker dain ya phir yahan post ker dain main usko shamil ker loonga

aur koi sawal ho to zaroor yaad fermane lain shermane ya intezaar ki zaroorat nahin hai


shukria



javed

Aap yahan hi post ker dain , ager pareshani hai werna aap  !st page per jaker padha lain aur wahin aik PM kene ki link bhi hai ker dain to woh Admin ke paas pahunch jaye ga
 aur aap ki nazm shamil ho jaye gee

Dear Javedbhai,
Here is my nazm for the  Competition.
Sapana
           
दिलको अब तन्हाईकी आदत सी है
शमाको बुज़ादो,अंधेरोकी आदत सी है.         

तेरे आनेकी कोई उम्मीद नही, फिरभी,       
दिलको तेरे ईन्तेज़ारकी आदत सी है.           

तेरी यादको दिलमें छूपाके बैठे है हम,       
हर खज़ानेको छूपानेकी आदत सी है.         

मुस्कुराके यु केहके चला जाना उनका,           
छोडो ईसे,ईसे तो बस तडपनेकी आदत सी है.           

तेरी यादोको नही छोड सकते है हम,           
यु तो हमे तेरे बगैर जीनेकी आदत सी है.       

सपना तुमहे मीलेंगी शहेरकी गलीयोंमे,          
गली गली तुमहे ढुंढनेकी आदत सी है.

सपना
                  
Dilko ab tanhaiki aadat si hai,
shamako bujhado, andheronki aadat si hai.

tere aaneki koi ummid naheen ,phirbhi,
dilko tere intezarki aadat si hai.

teri yaadko dilme chupake baithe hai ham,
har khazaneko chupaaneki aadat si hai.

muskurake yun kehke chale jana unka,
chodo ise, ise to bas tadapneki aadat si hai.

teri yaadonko naheen chod sakte ham,
yun to hame tere bagair jineki aadat si hai.

Sapana tumhe milegi shaherki galiyonme,
gali gali tumhe dhundhneki aadat si hai.

Sapana

Janaab Taasir Sidiqui,
It will take some time for you to understand Yoindia Functionability but if you are unsure where to send submission or how then simply send email to
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Though on first post you just have to click link to PM and send it to me by filling the form you see, I have recieved many Nazm by now.

Pl. Iadmin. answer this q.
Yes she is disqualify.That is reason two ppl are considerd.

JAVED

Taseer Sb

maine jawab to diya , aap ka certificate bhaij diya gaya hai,
nazm aap se kaha hai ke wahan nahin bhaij parahe hain auron ki tarha yahan post ker dain, main nahin samjh sakta ke aur kia jawab chahiye aap ko. rahi baat disqualify ki maine likha to hai woh disq. ghazal thee isi wajah se aap ko teesra inaam mila hai.
mager shaid dil badhane ko usko bhi include ker liya gaya hai

aur koi baat ho batain ab bhi ager narazgee baqi hai to batain main wohi karoon


javed