Suggestions and Discussion regarding Aug'2009 competition....!!!

by @kaash on July 27, 2009, 08:17:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 05, 2009, 08:26:01 PM »
Quote from: javedarshad on July 31, 2009, 01:04:50 PM
Tx
Husain
why, u r shy.
javed

javed bhai how i can access to post my ghazal in competion section .kindly guide.me

ALLAH HAFIZ
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«Reply #16 on: August 06, 2009, 02:58:29 AM »
Just click on reply and submit here.


tx

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«Reply #17 on: August 08, 2009, 06:37:21 PM »

Jo aag lagi hey nafrat ki, usey ashk bujha nahi payenge
                   
                   Dekhegi kabhi jab aainaa, taarikh ko aansoo aayenge

Hum to na rahengey duniaa mein , par baat hamaari yaad rahey,

                   Aaney waaley kal ke bachchey, kar yaad hamein sharmaayenge   
 
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«Reply #18 on: August 08, 2009, 09:54:42 PM »
Saraswat ji

Adaab

Kia aap mera msg .yahan quote kerne ka sabab bayan ker sakte hain. main naqis-u-aql yeh baat samajhne se qasir hun.

shukria
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«Reply #19 on: August 09, 2009, 08:38:42 AM »
sir i posted my poem but i m not understand how to write these here my poem and saw all person
can u help me sir

Rishi
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«Reply #20 on: August 09, 2009, 01:56:59 PM »
Sir
As u have posted  this post ,the same way

tx

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«Reply #21 on: August 13, 2009, 07:06:55 AM »
javed sahab aap se koi ghalti ho rahi hai taasir siddiqui ki har ghazal original hai, aap ne kaise keh diya maine copy paste kiya hai. is tarah se zalil mat karo.
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«Reply #22 on: August 13, 2009, 09:11:46 AM »
Hello Javed Ji
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All my friends of Yoindia

Yoindia has taken a nice initiative by starting this poetry competition.  Congratulations to Javed Ji and Admin Ji.
However I notice, the response so far is not very encouraging. Entries from regular ghazal writers of Yoindia are not yet visible on the screen. I suppose the people must be waiting for the others to post and most of the poems would be posted around the last date only. 
I shall also be posting my ghazal and I appeal to all to give overwhelming response to this initiative.

Javed Ji, I would like to satisfy my two queries and request you to kindly respond:

1.  Kya is competition me ghazal ki language strictly Urdu honi chahiye ya Hindi-Urdu ki milijuli Hindustani language chalegi.

2.  Kya ghazal English script ke alaawa keval Hindi ya Hindi-English dono me post ki ja sakti hai.

Krapaya is baare me guidance den. 

All the best for success of the competition.

SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #23 on: August 13, 2009, 11:00:48 AM »

Quote from: Taasir siddiqui on August 13, 2009, 07:06:55 AM
javed sahab aap se koi ghalti ho rahi hai taasir siddiqui ki har ghazal original hai, aap ne kaise keh diya maine copy paste kiya hai. is tarah se zalil mat karo.

Taasir Ji,

Aap ke kaam se, ghazalon se hum sab achchi tarah wakhif hain.

Mere khyaal main aapko galatfehmi ho gayi hai. Javed Sb ne aapko nahin, brokenbyluv ji ko likha tha copy-paste ke baare main.

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«Reply #24 on: August 19, 2009, 07:35:54 AM »
Hello Admin and Javed Ji,
Isi topic me 13 tarikh ko maine ek message post kiya hai aur kuchh jankari mangi hai.  Shayad aapki tavajjo us message per nahin gai.  Ek baar phir aapse darkhast hai ki proper jawab den.
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«Reply #25 on: August 19, 2009, 10:10:12 AM »
Sarvesh ji,

I was waiting Mr. Javed to answer your queries, anyhow it seems he has not yet seen this question.

Answers to your query
1. There is no restriction regarding Urdu but if its urdu poetry then avoid HINDI only words. You should see this post by Javed ji ==> Shayari ka Andaaz
2. You can post Ghazal in Hindi script or English Script or even Urdu script.
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«Reply #26 on: August 20, 2009, 02:29:48 AM »
Hi
I m sorry I was busy n could not answer .

Han yeh urdu ghazal comp. hai to zara hindustani hi ho.
aap kisi bhi asper IAdmin script mein likh sakte hain.
han andaaz ghazal ka ho , nazm ya jadeed shairy na ho otherwise that will be disqualify .

tx. Iadmin to take care


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«Reply #27 on: August 21, 2009, 07:29:56 AM »
Pyare Javed Bhai,

Der se likhne ke liye mazrat chahunga, Zindagi hum sab ki hi kafi masrufiyat bhari hey. Aap ka message iradatan na hokar bus yonhi computer ki kuch gad badi ke sabab hi hua hoga.Khiar, ziyada baqt na hone ya fir zald wazi ke hi natizatan yeh sab huaa hoga.

Apne mulk se dur zindagi ko kuch is tarah se dekhna padata hey.

" Dil chahata he beeta pal luat aaye koi,

                          Dil gun gunaye to sang mein gun gunaye koi,

Koi na ho ta-alluq to fir zafayen kaisi,

                          Be dard ban kisi ko fir qaun sataye koi

Sote ko ho jagana hey "Ram" Kaam mumkin,
                            
                          Soney ka ho bahana kaise jagaye koi."  


Aage kahna chahunga ki apni zaban ( Hindotani, Hindavi) jo ki Amir Khosro aur Mir zaisi aur bahut si adeem shkhsiaton ki dharohar hey , Aap ki yeh koshis tarif e qabil hey. Meri dua aap aur sab sathiaun ke saath hey.

Once again,I deeply regret any inconvenience caused  due to ignorance or hurry on my part.

Best Regards,

Ram Saraswat  
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«Reply #28 on: August 21, 2009, 07:41:20 PM »
Tx

Janab



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«Reply #29 on: August 22, 2009, 01:59:16 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on August 22, 2009, 07:23:21 AM
Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai Aapne Sarvesh Ji
Bahut Hi Achhi Tarha Se Sachai Ko Lafzon
Mein Peeroya Hai Aapne.Bahut Hi Kum Log
Aisa Kar Paate Hai. Bas Itna Hi Kahunga
Ki Aapne Aaj Dil Ko Khush Kar Diya,
Bas Dua Hai Khush Raho Aur Kya Aur
Yun Hi Humesha Likhte Raho..
Aur Ab Humari Himmat To Naho Hoti Ki
Yahaan Par Kuch Likhen Kyun Ki
Aapne Itna Pyaar Jo Likh Diya..
Keepo It Up...


AAp logon ko advice kia gaya tha ke is thread mein koi comments na dain
mager phir bhi likh rahe hain . Pl. do not do this

tx


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