Describe urself in a "sher".......

by ehsaas chahat ka on December 17, 2009, 04:18:56 PM
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Hi guyz,,,,,,,,,,,
is thread mein khud ko kisi ek sher mein bayan karna hai aap sab ne .......
hope aap sab enjoy karenge ..........
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2009, 05:31:33 PM »
Achha Thread Open Kiya Hai Ehsas Ji Aapne

Koshish Karte Hai Chalo...Galti Maaf Ho..!


Ek Yun Bhi Muhabbat Mein Ada Rasham Karli
Kuch Aur To Na Hua Bas Zidagi Khatam Karli.!
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2009, 06:48:14 PM »
Achha Thread Open Kiya Hai Ehsas Ji Aapne

Koshish Karte Hai Chalo...Galti Maaf Ho..!


Ek Yun Bhi Muhabbat Mein Ada Rasham Karli
Kuch Aur To Na Hua Bas Zidagi Khatam Karli.!


good one ji
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2009, 10:11:22 PM »
good thread,

one shair from my own ghazal

Bohat tha dukh hum ko bhee zamanay ki narasaee ka
Mager ab hum zamna hain bhala kuch dair main sahee

anokhi ladli
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2009, 11:13:35 PM »
Nice thread Ehsaas Ji

Kal tak rah na sakte the vo pal bhar hamse duur
Aaj na jane kyun hain vo hamse milane se majbuur
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«Reply #5 on: December 18, 2009, 11:05:37 AM »
Nice thread Ehsaas Ji

Kal tak rah na sakte the vo pal bhar hamse duur
Aaj na jane kyun hain vo hamse milane se majbuur



VERY GOOD JI
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«Reply #6 on: December 18, 2009, 11:30:51 AM »
मत कहो यूँ के बुरी अपनी ये तकदीरें थीं
Mat kahon yu.n ke buri apni ye taqdeere.n thi.n
तुम अगर हौसला करते, कई तदबीरें थीं
Tum agar hausla karte, kaee.n tadbeerei.n thi.n
(mine)




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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #7 on: December 18, 2009, 03:19:29 PM »
Nice Thread Ehsaas JI
Kuch Koshish Hum Bhi Kar Rhe Hai



Hum Jinki Chahat Mein Deewane Ho Gaye
Unke Khatir Apno Ke Liye Beigane Ho Gaye
Jab Hum Gaye Unke Samne To Ek Hi Jawab Aaya
Humne To Kabhi Aapko Chaha Hi Nahi
Aap Aise Hi Kaise Humare Deewane HO Gaye
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2009, 05:40:03 AM »
Nice one Rishi Ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2009, 01:23:46 PM »
                 

                    TU GAR BEWAFA HAI TO ACHACHA HAI ZALIM,
                    MUJHEY APNAYAA TO KAHIN KA NAHIN RAHEY GAA ZALIM.! Is it SO!
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2012, 02:22:45 AM »
mujhe lagta hai--ye thread mindblowing hai--or yha par khud ko or apne naam dono ko sher me express krna chahie--
chalie ek bekaar si kosis iss Sarfire ka bhi --
!
bojheel nigaahon par hi khila hoon main
loag kahte sarfira hoon main

rahun tanha magar sang sabhi ke chala hoon main
ik apne siwa har ek se milaa hoon main
!!
!!
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2012, 01:59:38 PM »
Hm b apne bare me kuch btate hain...
"...palat kr aankh nm krna
hme hrgiz nhi aata..
Gye lmhon ka gm krna
hme hrgiz nhi aata..
Mohabbat ho to behad ho
Nafrat ho to bepnaah..
Koi bhi kaam km krna
hme hrgiz nhi aata.
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2012, 04:11:15 PM »
wah noor ji acha thread .

Khushi koi humse dhoor reh nahi sakti ,

gham ki koi lau hume jala nai sakti .

Sagar mein rehkar bhi hum pyase hain .

Koi lehar saahil se takra kar sath reh nahi sakti
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2012, 06:00:14 PM »
khil jati hain kaliyan bandh jaata hai samaa,
Jab yoindia pe padharein dolly amma..
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«Reply #14 on: February 16, 2012, 07:00:32 PM »
kahte hai har mefil me rang bhar dete hai hum,
~aatish~ hai pathar ko bi mom kar dete hai hum Winking
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