Reply the sher .....

[zama]

Assalamu allaikum,
         As u all r alert of sher'n all y not start a useful game to enhance our thinking power n also to develop our writing skill

Here's a new topic where u have to reply for the given sher just in 2 lines,it does'nt mean that 4 lines are'nt allowed here u can post 4 liners too .The only rule which we have to carry is all your reply's or sher's should be of your own 'n not copy paste ...so guyz....stick to the rule 'n keep posting ....enjoy this thread 'n develop u r skill....


Regards,
Zama

[zama]

Chaliye ...pehla sher meri taraf se ...

Sajda toh rooz hum karte hai ya,....maula
par ek muhabbath mein main qafir sa kyu bana

[abdbundeli]

Aashiq mein bhi wahee hai, maashooq mein bhi hai woh!
Kartey hain muhabbat jo, pinhaan namaaz hai woh!!
                              - abd bundeli

[zama]

Khudaya muhabbat hai agar toh naseeb-e-judai kyu
aghaaz mein tabassum khile magar, anjaam-e-burai kyu
hai iska talukat ruh se agar toh jism-e-deewangi kyu
wafa nibha kar bhi mile yahan ,sou baar bewafai kyu

Zama

[abdbundeli]

Ham muhabbat ki baat kartey hain zinaan ki naheen!
Zinaan bhi qudartan jismoun ki haqeeqat hi hai!

Tamaam qaayadey-qaanoon dimaagii hain, shaayari jaisey,
Aadmee taaki aman-chain sey khushee sey rahey!!
                                   - abd bundeli

[zama]

Insaan jab se dimaag se kaam lene laga hai
hamare darmiyan deewar khada hone laga hai

aman aur khushi k naam-o-nishan mit ne laga hai
apni hi mulk ko sau tukdo.n mein baan.tne laga hai

Zama

[abdbundeli]

Yeh daastaan to samajhiye azal sey jaaree hai!
Rooh-e-insaan, haar kar bhi naheen haaree hai!
Chaand-taaroun pai ghar basaayengey zameen sey urh;
Aur, zaldee hi pahunch jaayengey: taiyaaree hai!!
                        - abd bundeli

[salma786]

Kuch logo ke khatir humne,
Apna samman gawaya,
Ek hi mulk hai apna,
Par isko tukdo me bata paya!

[abdbundeli]

salma786 ji!
Ba'ad batney key bhi, dil eik hain abhi bhi to!
Waqt aayegaa dubaarah qareeb aayengey!
Jo alhadah hain, wo tootey hai, aur tooteyngey;
Tootatey-tootatey aa dil mein jagah paayengey!!
                             - abd bundeli

[salma786]

Apka to jawab hi nahi ABD ji
Phir bhi gustakhi ki mafi chahungi


Isi umid se hum Duniya me,
Pyaar ka parcham lehrayenge,
Jo tukdo me toota paya,
Unhe pyar se phir jod jayenge!

[abdbundeli]

Apka to jawab hi nahi ABD ji
Phir bhi gustakhi ki mafi chahungi

Isi umid se hum Duniya me,
Pyaar ka parcham lehrayenge,
Jo tukdo me toota paya,
Unhe pyar se phir jod jayenge!

Shukriyah salma786ji! You're most welcome!

Tumhaarey paak daaman mein nihaan hai pyaar ki marham:
Kareyngey laakh ham irshaad, fir bhi raheygaa wo kam!
Kabhi maan ho, kabhi beytee, kabhi daadee, kabhi dulhin;
Kabhi Lailaa, kabhi Sohni: sakaa hai koun tumko gin!!

                                      - abd bundeli

[zama]

Shukriyah salma786ji! You're most welcome!

Tumhaarey paak daaman mein nihaan hai pyaar ki marham:
Kareyngey laakh ham irshaad, fir bhi raheygaa wo kam!
Kabhi maan ho, kabhi beytee, kabhi daadee, kabhi dulhin;
Kabhi Lailaa, kabhi Sohni: sakaa hai koun tumko gin!!

                                      - abd bundeli

Bahot badiya Abd saheb.

Salma ji...aap ka bhi jawaab nahi.....

Hai kayi log jinhoone hume pehchana hai
iss duniya mein hamare ehmiyath ko jana hai
par aaj bhi cheenkh sunayi deti hai kayi maa behano.n ki
jinke amanat luti hui izzat ,bhuka pet aur ek gareeb khana hai


Zama

[Azeem Azaad]

Waah Waah Good Going Doston,.

Zama Ji, Abd Bhaiya, Salma Ji,.

[abdbundeli]

Bahot badiya Abd saheb.
Salma ji...aap ka bhi jawaab nahi.....
Hai kayi log jinhoone hume pehchana hai
iss duniya mein hamare ehmiyath ko jana hai
par aaj bhi cheenkh sunayi deti hai kayi maa behano.n ki
jinke amanat luti hui izzat ,bhuka pet aur ek gareeb khana hai
Zama

Shkriyah Zama ji!

Har aurat maan bananey ko paidah hoti hai;
Wah doodh pilaatee hai, mailaa bhi dhotee hai:
Tab kaheen, bastiyaan basteen hain insaanoun keen:
Tab, har ghar mein khushiyoun kee rounaq hotee hai!!

                               - abd bundeli

[rawattanha]

yun kisi se dill laga baithe,
zindagi mein gamon ki mefil saza baithe
haar chuke hain sab kuch
phir bhi unke aane ki aass laga baithe.