Reply the sher .....

[Roja]

Kaash yeh dil na hotaa harjaayee:
Ham bhi duniyaa mein chain sey rahtey!
Sabhee hawaayen hamaareen hoteen;
Jhoomtey saath, bin bahey bahtey!!

                 - abd bundeli

Mai us ka hu ye raaz woh jaan gaya hai, magar
Woh kis ka hai, ye sawal mujhe sone nahi deta ..

[abdbundeli]

Mai us ka hu ye raaz woh jaan gaya hai, magar
Woh kis ka hai, ye sawal mujhe sone nahi deta ..

Woh tumhaaraa hi koyi hogaa, doosarey kaa naheen!
Zaraa nigaah jhukaa deykh lo seeney mein waheen!
Woh lagaataar zeyhn mein, jigar mein rahtaa hai;
Woh mileygaa waheen, jaayegaa naheen aur kaheen!!

                                - abd bundeli

[Roja]

Woh tumhaaraa hi koyi hogaa, doosarey kaa naheen!
Zaraa nigaah jhukaa deykh lo seeney mein waheen!
Woh lagaataar zeyhn mein, jigar mein rahtaa hai;
Woh mileygaa waheen, jaayegaa naheen aur kaheen!!

                                - abd bundeli

Unka jikr, unki tamanna, unki yaad
Waqt kitna keemti hai in dino.... 

[abdbundeli]

Unka jikr, unki tamanna, unki yaad
Waqt kitna keemti hai in dino.... 

Dil mein baithhaa hai, to baithhaa hi raheygaa maano!
Yeh wo afsaanah hai, chaaho to umra bhar taano!
Eik lamhah bhi wasl-e-yaar kaa bahut hai, 'abd',
Kaash us lamhey-e-khaas ko hi zindagee jaano!!

                        - abd bundeli

[Roja]

Dil mein baithhaa hai, to baithhaa hi raheygaa maano!
Yeh wo afsaanah hai, chaaho to umra bhar taano!
Eik lamhah bhi wasl-e-yaar kaa bahut hai, 'abd',
Kaash us lamhey-e-khaas ko hi zindagee jaano!!

                        - abd bundeli

aaahaa... Very good...ji

Mit-mitke mohabbat mein teri
Yu tujhko pukare jaate hai..
Kat-kat ke dariya ki teh mein
Jis tarah kinare jaate hai..
 

[abdbundeli]

aaahaa... Very good...ji


Mit-mit ke mohabbat mein teri
Yun tujhko pukare jaate hain..
Kat-kat kar dariya ki tah mein
Jis tarah kinare jaate hain..
 

Roja! Bahut hi pyaarey 'metaphor' kaa isteymaal kiyaa hai Roja: 'The Poetess' ney! Dil-o-dimaag ki gahraayee mein kaheen eik lahar-see rawaan hotee lagee! It's lovely!

Yeh kaisaa jazbah hai dil kaa, jo itnaa meethaa lagtaa hai?
Mit jaaney mein bhee hai sukoon, jazbey ko jazbah thhagtaa hai!
In jazboun kee gahraayee mein utreygaa jo bhee, doobeygaa:
Un lachkeelee zanjeeroun mein bandh kar bhee, koyee bhagtaa hai?

                   - abd bundeli

[Roja]

Roja! Bahut hi pyaarey 'metaphor' kaa isteymaal kiyaa hai Roja: 'The Poetess' ney! Dil-o-dimaag ki gahraayee mein kaheen eik lahar-see rawaan hotee lagee! It's lovely!

Yeh kaisaa jazbah hai dil kaa, jo itnaa meethaa lagtaa hai?
Mit jaaney mein bhee hai sukoon, jazbey ko jazbah thhagtaa hai!
In jazboun kee gahraayee mein utreygaa jo bhee, doobeygaa:
Un lachkeelee zanjeeroun mein bandh kar bhee, koyee bhagtaa hai?

                   - abd bundeli

Uncle jii..... Ati sunder 

Aag ber diya hai Mohabbat ne meri rag-rag mein Sanam
Mera toh khoon bi Shayari karne laga.. 

[abdbundeli]

Uncle jii..... Ati sunder 


Aag bhar di hai Mohabbat ne jo rag-rag mein Sanam,
Ki,mera khoon bhi laga hai Shayari karne.. 

Shukriyah Roja!

Dil-e-aashiq mein ghar hai shayari kaa!
Qayaam har jigar hai shayari kaa!
Raah mein khushbooyen hain ulfat keen;
Barhaa meethhaa safar hai shayari kaa!

                    - abd bundeli

[Roja]

Roja! Bahut hi pyaarey 'metaphor' kaa isteymaal kiyaa hai Roja: 'The Poetess' ney! Dil-o-dimaag ki gahraayee mein kaheen eik lahar-see rawaan hotee lagee! It's lovely!

Yeh kaisaa jazbah hai dil kaa, jo itnaa meethaa lagtaa hai?
Mit jaaney mein bhee hai sukoon, jazbey ko jazbah thhagtaa hai!
In jazboun kee gahraayee mein utreygaa jo bhee, doobeygaa:
Un lachkeelee zanjeeroun mein bandh kar bhee, koyee bhagtaa hai?

                   - abd bundeli

Shukriya....  Nice very nice ... again..

Ab is surat se kya aaye tere aaina-khane mein sanam
Teri tasvir hi bankar teri tasvir dekhenge...!!
 

[abdbundeli]

Shukriya....  Nice very nice ... again..


Ab is surat se kya aaye tere aaina-khane mein sanam
Teri tasvir hi bankar teri tasvir dekhenge...!!
 

Bahut khoob Roja! And, thanks!

Bhalaa kyoun aankh deykheygee nageeney ko nageeney mein?
Jigar par haath rakh apney, mazah aayegaa jeeney mein!
Kisee aayeeney-khaaney mein zaroorat kyaa hai jaaney kee;
Zaraa nazareyn jhukaa kar deykh, woh hai rawaan seeney mein!!

                             - abd bundeli

                             

[Roja]

Unhe dekhne se jo aa jaati hai chehre pe raunak
Vo samajhte hai ki bimar Roja ka haal accha ho gaya hai..!! 

[abdbundeli]

Unhe dekhne se jo aa jaati hai chehre pe raunak
Vo samajhte hai ki bimar Roja ka haal accha ho gaya hai..!! 

"Un key aaney sey jo aa jaatee hai munh par rounaq;
Woh samajhtey hain ki beemaar kaa haal achchhaa hai!"

Well,Roja! Why you're now using 'quotations' in place your own creations? When you post your own poems, they are often more impressive, than such 'corrupted quotations'!
                                            - abd bundeli

[Roja]

Well,Roja! Why you're now using 'quotations' in place your own creations? When you post your own poems, they are often more impressive, than such 'corrupted quotations'!
                                            - abd bundeli

okkk .. understood

[abdbundeli]

okkk .. understood

Thanks Roja! I know pretty well that you're not only a fine poetess, but a much finer person, to the best of my knowledge and belief!
           - abd bundeli

[Roja]

Thanks Roja! I know pretty well that you're not only a fine poetess, but a much finer person, to the best of my knowledge and belief!
           - abd bundeli

Ooh Thanks dear Uncle...