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Roja
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«Reply #195 on: June 11, 2009, 01:28:28 PM »
Wafa karenge, nibhayenge baat maanenge
Tumhe bhi yaad hai kuch yeh kalam kiska tha?

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abdbundeli
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«Reply #196 on: June 11, 2009, 03:10:41 PM »
Quote from: Roja on June 11, 2009, 01:06:50 PM
Ooh Thanks dear Uncle...
You're welcome, Roja!
            - abd bundeli
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #197 on: June 11, 2009, 03:21:11 PM »
Quote from: Roja on June 11, 2009, 01:28:28 PM

Wafa karenge, nibhayenge baat maanenge
Tumhe bhi yaad hai kuch yeh kalam kiska tha?



Meyrey laboun pai lahartaa wo naam kis kaa thaa?
Mujhey milaa hai, magar wo inaam kis kaa thaa?
Un ney rishtey banaa rakhey hain na jaaney kyaa-kyaa:
Aur ab poochh rahey hain kalaam kis kaa thaa?

                          - abd bundeli
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Roja
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«Reply #198 on: June 11, 2009, 04:14:58 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on June 11, 2009, 03:21:11 PM

Meyrey laboun pai lahartaa wo naam kis kaa thaa?
Mujhey milaa hai, magar wo inaam kis kaa thaa?
Un ney rishtey banaa rakhey hain na jaaney kyaa-kyaa:
Aur ab poochh rahey hain kalaam kis kaa thaa?

                          - abd bundeli


Zamana bade shauk se sun raha tha
Hum tak  gaye the kahani pyar ki sunate sunate
Itna pass aakar kehte ho kitne rishte bana rakha hai
Ek tum hi ho mera sahara, tum hi ho meri zindagi..
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #199 on: June 12, 2009, 03:54:07 AM »
Quote from: Roja on June 11, 2009, 04:14:58 PM

Zamana bade shauk se sun raha tha
Hum tak  gaye the kahani pyar ki sunate sunate
Itna pass aakar kehte ho kitne rishte bana rakha hai
Ek tum hi ho mera sahara, tum hi ho meri zindagi..
 Usual Smile
Kaash yeh baat khwaab mein bhi sach huyee hotee!
Kaash yeh raat baahuoun mein guzaaree hotee!!
Kaash woh khaas hamaarey liye sajey hotey;
Saans kyaa, saaree kaainaat hamaaree hotee!!

                       - abd bundeli
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Roja
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«Reply #200 on: June 12, 2009, 02:55:39 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on June 12, 2009, 03:54:07 AM
Kaash yeh baat khwaab mein bhi sach huyee hotee!
Kaash yeh raat baahuoun mein guzaaree hotee!!
Kaash woh khaas hamaarey liye sajey hotey;
Saans kyaa, saaree kaainaat hamaaree hotee!!

                       - abd bundeli

ooh aww hahaha..

Yahi hai zindagi apni, yahi hai bandagi apni,
Ki unka naam aaya aur palkein juk gayi apni..

 
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Nadeem Ahmed Kavish
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«Reply #201 on: June 12, 2009, 04:36:23 PM »
Na garaz kisi se na waasta mujhe kaam apne kaam se,
Tere zikr se teri fikr se teri yaad se tere naam se
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #202 on: June 13, 2009, 07:25:00 AM »
Quote from: Roja on June 12, 2009, 02:55:39 PM
ooh aww hahaha..

Yahi hai zindagi apni, yahi hai bandagi apni,
Ki unka naam aaya aur palkein juk gayi apni..
 
Roja ji,
 Thanks a lot!
         
Kyaa hi rishtah hai, naam aaye to shafaq chhalkey:
Woh nisf shab ho, shaam ho, ki, lamheyn hon halkey!
Aur ham, baam par nazar tikaaye thhahrey hain:
Hatey hijaab-e-baam aur noor-e-rukh jhalkey!!

                  - abd bundeli
 
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #203 on: June 13, 2009, 07:34:08 AM »
Quote from: Nadeem Ahmed Kavish on June 12, 2009, 04:36:23 PM
Na garaz kisi se na waasta mujhe kaam apne kaam se,
Tere zikr se teri fikr se teri yaad se tere naam se


Waah! Kyaa hi khoob!

Bazm mein un kee, kabhi apnaa naam aataa thaa!
Ham ko lagtaa thaa, kaheen kuchh maheen naataa thaa!
Zikra bhi apnaa, ab unhain katayi pasand naheen;
Jin ko mein bazm-e-tasawwur mein roz paataa thaa!!
                         
                            - abd bundeli
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shab
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«Reply #204 on: June 13, 2009, 07:41:02 AM »
WAAH ! MAZA AAGAYA, ABD JI
LAFZ NAHI MILTI AAPKE TAARIF KARNE KA.
WAKAI AAP ACHCHE LIKHTE HAI
KEEP IT UP
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #205 on: June 13, 2009, 08:17:44 AM »
Quote from: shab on June 13, 2009, 07:41:02 AM
WAAH ! MAZA AAGAYA, ABD JI
LAFZ NAHI MILTI AAPKE TAARIF KARNE KA.
WAKAI AAP ACHCHE LIKHTE HAI
KEEP IT UP
Shabana ji!
Mujhey khushee hai aap ko hamaaraa 'kalam' pasand aa rahaa hai! Nazar-e-inaayat banaaye rakhiyegaa! Shukriyah!
                                              - abd bundeli
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Nadeem Ahmed Kavish
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«Reply #206 on: June 13, 2009, 01:46:04 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on June 13, 2009, 07:34:08 AM


Waah! Kyaa hi khoob!

Bazm mein un kee, kabhi apnaa naam aataa thaa!
Ham ko lagtaa thaa, kaheen kuchh maheen naataa thaa!
Zikra bhi apnaa, ab unhain katayi pasand naheen;
Jin ko mein bazm-e-tasawwur mein roz paataa thaa!!
                         
                            - abd bundeli


KOi dil thaame khada hai koi mahve deed hai,
Aaye wo mahfil mein to ik hashr barpa ho gaya
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #207 on: June 14, 2009, 07:25:48 AM »
Quote from: Nadeem Ahmed Kavish on June 13, 2009, 01:46:04 PM
KOi dil thaame khada hai koi mahve deed hai,
Aaye wo mahfil mein to ik hashr barpa ho gaya

Nadeem Ahmed Kavish ji!
 Eik saaloun puraanee apnee eik gazal key chand asha'ar peish kar rahaa hoon jis mein mahfil-e-daawar-e-hashra mein 'un' key husn-e-beymisaal kaa zikra hai:

Daawar-e-hashra khud bhee achambhey mein thaa:
Aaye tum: sab kharhey they: gazab shaan thee!!

Shaam-e-mahshar mein khushiyoun kaa aagaaz hai:
Jo, ki, tum bin qayaam-e-paristaan thee!

Khoobsoorat nigaahoun ko mat pheyriye;
Tum na they, mahfil-e-husn weeraan thee!

Hashra key shahriyoun ko, ‘abd’, deykhiye:
Husn ki khoob baareeq pahichaan thee!!

              Pooree gazal alag sey peish karoongaa, taa ki, aur log bhi usey padhh sakeyn!
                          - abd bundeli
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shab
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«Reply #208 on: June 14, 2009, 07:35:58 AM »
 WAAH ! BAHUT KHOOB ABD JI
BAAKI GAZAL KA INTEZAR KARUNGI
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #209 on: June 14, 2009, 11:58:55 AM »
Quote from: shab on June 14, 2009, 07:35:58 AM
WAAH ! BAHUT KHOOB ABD JI
BAAKI GAZAL KA INTEZAR KARUNGI
Thanks a lot, Shabana ji! Pooree gazal peish ho chukee hai!
                                         - abd bundeli
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