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Roja
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«Reply #240 on: August 05, 2009, 03:27:51 PM »
shayad wali line mein shayad kami kii jagah kabhi likha diya hai aapne roja

dil kii har dastal ka raaz jaan jaata
toh mere sanam tu mera raaz jaan jaata
tu bhi karne lagta bepanaah muhabbat mujhse
yeh zamaana mohabbat ka raaz jaan jaata

typing error hua. teek kiya maine saahil  Usual Smile Thanks mujhe bataya aapne
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #241 on: August 05, 2009, 06:13:30 PM »
Aabadiyon mein hum bas akele nazer aaye
Virana jisse kehte hai viraan na payee

Shayad hai aaj tak bhi apni kasam mein kami
Jo dil mein hai, "Roja", isse pehchan na payee 



Ham jaantey huye bhee, kuchh jaantey naheen!
Pahichaantey huye bhee, pahichaantey naheen!
Ham beywafaa hain khud sey, aur apney jigar sey;
Kahney ko bahut kuchh hai, par, bakhaantey naheen!!

                         - abd bundeli
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Roja
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«Reply #242 on: August 09, 2009, 05:23:15 PM »

Ham jaantey huye bhee, kuchh jaantey naheen!
Pahichaantey huye bhee, pahichaantey naheen!
Ham beywafaa hain khud sey, aur apney jigar sey;
Kahney ko bahut kuchh hai, par, bakhaantey naheen!!

                         - abd bundeli


Thi kabhi her shab gulisthane-nishaad
Muddaton se her kali murjayi hai
Dhur rehti hu tere khuche se mai
Meri aahon mein teri ruswayi hai
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #243 on: August 09, 2009, 06:51:35 PM »
Andaz badalne lagte hain, hoton pe shararat hoti hai,
Andaz badalne lagte hain, hoton pe shararat hoti hai,
Nazron se pata chal jata hai
Jis dilme mohabbat hoti hai…
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #244 on: August 10, 2009, 04:44:32 AM »

Thi kabhi her shab gulisthan-e-nished
Muddaton se har kali murjhayi hai
Dur rehti hun tere kuche se main
Meri aahon mein teri ruswayi hai

Armaan kee uunchaaiyaan naapeen haneen jaateen!
Insaan kee gahraaiyaan naapeen haneen jaateen!
Harjaayee kaheyn woh, ki, kaheyn beywafaa hamain?
Buhtaan kee ruswaaiyaan naapeen haneen jaateen!!

(Poori gazal, gazaloun key forum mein post karoongaa.)
                          - abd bundeli

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Roja
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«Reply #245 on: August 12, 2009, 03:02:12 AM »
Armaan kee uunchaaiyaan naapeen haneen jaateen!
Insaan kee gahraaiyaan naapeen haneen jaateen!
Harjaayee kaheyn woh, ki, kaheyn beywafaa hamain?
Buhtaan kee ruswaaiyaan naapeen haneen jaateen!!

(Poori gazal, gazaloun key forum mein post karoongaa.)
                          - abd bundeli



Has-has ke bade zulm sahe humne magar
Apni juban se tumhari burayee na ho saki..

Insaan mein khuda ka noor hai magar
Insaan se uski zulwanumayi na ho saki


(Poori gazal mai b Gazal section mein post karungi  Usual Smile )
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #246 on: August 12, 2009, 04:29:41 AM »

Has-has ke bade zulm sahe humne magar
Apni juban se tumhari burayee na ho saki..

Insaan mein khuda ka noor hai magar
Insaan se uski zulwanumayi na ho saki


(Poori gazal mai b Gazal section mein post karungi  Usual Smile )

Ham chaahtey hain jis ko, us mein chaah kar bhi ham,
Paatey naheen hain khoj kabhee bhee buraaiyaan!
Lagtaa hai koyi neem farishtah hai nazar mein;
Hon laakh us key rukh pai jahannam ki jhaaniyaan!!

                                - abd bundeli
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Roja
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«Reply #247 on: August 12, 2009, 01:51:31 PM »

Ham chaahtey hain jis ko, us mein chaah kar bhi ham,
Paatey naheen hain khoj kabhee bhee buraaiyaan!
Lagtaa hai koyi neem farishtah hai nazar mein;
Hon laakh us key rukh pai jahannam ki jhaaniyaan!!

                                - abd bundeli


Samjho mat, hum hakeer hai saheb
Tere dhar ke faqeer hai saheb  Giggle
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Roja
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«Reply #248 on: August 12, 2009, 02:00:01 PM »
Thanks @Kaash ji... aapne b bahut accha likha hai  Thumbs UP

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abdbundeli
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«Reply #249 on: August 12, 2009, 02:31:05 PM »

Samjho mat, hum hakeer hai saheb
Tere dhar ke faqeer hai saheb  Giggle

Yah sach naheen hai Roja!

Us kee duniyaa mein kuchh haqeer naheen!
Koun hai jo yahaan faqeer naheen?
Muskuraatey hain sabhee, kyoun ki, kyaa kareyn warnah?
Jhaankiye dil mein; koun hai, ki, jo dilgeer naheen?


                                     - abd bundeli


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Roja
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«Reply #250 on: August 12, 2009, 02:40:07 PM »
Yah sach naheen hai Roja!

Us kee duniyaa mein kuchh haqeer naheen!
Koun hai jo yahaan faqeer naheen?
Muskuraatey hain sabhee, kyoun ki, kyaa kareyn warnah?
Jhaankiye dil mein; koun hai, ki, jo dilgeer naheen?


                                     - abd bundeli




Toda toda sach hai na uncle  tongue3


Jasan dethe rahe-wafa mein jo
Bande wo be-nazeer hai saheb
Zindagi ko samajne ke kasir (asamarth)
Kaise keh de dabeer(writer) hai saheb tongue3
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #251 on: August 12, 2009, 04:17:54 PM »

Toda toda sach hai na uncle  tongue3


Jasan dethe rahe-wafa mein jo
Bande wo be-nazeer hai saheb
Zindagi ko samajne ke kasir (asamarth)
Kaise keh de dabeer(writer) hai saheb tongue3

Okay Roja! Too jo bhi ho, par hai barhee hee pyaaree! Teyree baateyn dil ko chhooteen hain! May HE BLESS you!

Zindagee, zindaee hai; jeenaa hai!
Zahar ho aab-e-nosh, peenaa hai!
Khoobsoorat hai zindagee; leykin,
Mout firdous kee haseenaa hai!!

               - abd bundeli
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Roja
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«Reply #252 on: August 12, 2009, 04:20:31 PM »
Okay Roja! Too jo bhi ho, par hai barhee hee pyaaree! Teyree baateyn dil ko chhooteen hain! May HE BLESS you!

Zindagee, zindaee hai; jeenaa hai!
Zahar hoi, aab-e-nosh peenaa hai!
Khoobsoorat hai zindagee; leykin,
Mout firdous kee haseenaa hai!!

               - abd bundeli

Thanks for the blessings Uncle ji. Yu hi saat dete rehna  icon_thumleft
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #253 on: August 12, 2009, 04:23:53 PM »
Thanks for the blessings Uncle ji. Yu hi saat dete rehna  icon_thumleft

That's like a good girl!
You're welcome Roja!
            - abd bundedi
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #254 on: August 12, 2009, 04:25:05 PM »
bahot acha likha hai Abd ji and Roja ji  Applause Applause Applause

apni to ye adat hai ki khushaash-bashaash(khush) rahte hain
vassaaf(bahot prashnsha karna) nahi  tongue3 lihaaf bhi shaffaaf(transparent) rakhte hain

Thanks @kaash
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