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abdbundeli
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«Reply #345 on: July 03, 2010, 06:04:35 AM »
Kalki Aditya ney kahaa hai aaj hi mujh sey;
Kuchh bhi likhney key liye mujh ko zeyhn mein rakhnaa!
Deykhnaa kis tarah mahakeygaa tumhaaraa shaayar,
Aab-e-kousar sey mahaktee hai jis tarah jannat!!
             
                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #346 on: July 14, 2010, 04:38:22 PM »




Tere aane se Aab-e-kousar sey mahak gayee hai mehfil
Tere sangmermari gorey badan sey roshan hai ye mehfil
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #347 on: July 15, 2010, 11:26:52 AM »
Tum to khwaaboun mein kah gaye they roz aaney ko!
Mout aayee hai baarhaa mujhey sulaaney ko!!

                         - abd bundeli
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #348 on: July 15, 2010, 11:51:07 AM »
Sapno ka paigaam pahucha nahi un tak
Baarhaa yamraaj ne sunn leeya tab tak

          -koyal



Tum to khwaaboun mein kah gaye they roz aaney ko!
Mout aayee hai baarhaa mujhey sulaaney ko!!

                         - abd bundeli

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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #349 on: July 15, 2010, 12:01:54 PM »
Samay tha yahi yamraaj ke aane ka
Aur tujhe maut ki paigaam sunane ka
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #350 on: July 15, 2010, 12:16:50 PM »
Maut ka koi darr nahi mujhe
Bas shikaayat hai itni tumse
Kyu aagya yamraaj ka vahaan
O balam Tere aane sey pehle


Samay tha yahi yamraaj ke aane ka
Aur tujhe maut ki paigaam sunane ka
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #351 on: July 15, 2010, 12:19:42 PM »
Maut ka koi darr nahi mujhe
Bas shikaayat hai itni tumse
Kyu aagya yamraaj ka vahaan
O balam Tere aane sey pehle




Aana hi pada muje tere liye,
kyu ki sachai thi mahobbat me....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #352 on: July 15, 2010, 12:34:09 PM »
Meri mohbbat ko pehchana tune
Khush kar diya aaj mujhe tune
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«Reply #353 on: July 15, 2010, 12:56:17 PM »
ye khushi yunhi lutana tu
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #354 on: July 15, 2010, 01:11:59 PM »
Lo karti hu aaj ye wada tujhse meri sakhee
Khush rahungi aur khushiye lutatee rahungi

Meine hasne ka waada kiya tha kabhi kisise
Essiliye ab sada muskuraati hu mein sakhee


(kisi picture ka gana bhi thaa eysa hi kuchh...)
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #355 on: July 16, 2010, 06:20:13 AM »
Thanks Koyal46 ji! Aap kaa ta'arruf, ki, aap hain:
---- Ek pyari si surat,
Ek masum sa chehra,
2 jheel si ankhe,
Kuchh mithi mithi baate,
Ek nazuk ada,
Kuchh masti kuchh maza,
Thodi si shrarat,
Bahut sari mohabbat,
Ek bholi si muskan,
Ooncha udne ka armaan,
Sabse alag sabse juda,
Jiski hai pyari har ek ada.......

Aysi Sweet Girl Hai "KOYAL" ----

Uyoon-e-dil aapki 'eik jhalak' paaney ko machltey-sey lagey!

Raah par koyi nahin hai kaheen tah-e-jaw tak,
Magar, azal sey deed muntazir hai, thhahree hai!

                                  - abd bundeli
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #356 on: July 16, 2010, 11:29:12 AM »
Abd-ji sher aapka sunder hai....
Mein samajh nahi payee....
Urdu nahi aati mujhko...

tah-e-jaw....= ?
teesari puri line....?
Samjhaiyega....

Thanks Koyal46 ji! Aap kaa ta'arruf, ki, aap hain:
---- Ek pyari si surat,
Ek masum sa chehra,
2 jheel si ankhe,
Kuchh mithi mithi baate,
Ek nazuk ada,
Kuchh masti kuchh maza,
Thodi si shrarat,
Bahut sari mohabbat,
Ek bholi si muskan,
Ooncha udne ka armaan,
Sabse alag sabse juda,
Jiski hai pyari har ek ada.......

Aysi Sweet Girl Hai "KOYAL" ----

Uyoon-e-dil aapki 'eik jhalak' paaney ko machltey-sey lagey!

Raah par koyi nahin hai kaheen tah-e-jaw tak,
Magar, azal sey deed muntazir hai, thhahree hai!

                                  - abd bundeli

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abdbundeli
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«Reply #357 on: July 16, 2010, 01:45:02 PM »
Abd-ji sher aapka sunder hai....
Mein samajh nahi payee....
Urdu nahi aati mujhko...

tah-e-jaw....=
teesari puri line....?
Samjhaiyega....


Dear KOYAL-46 ji!

The desired meanings are given below:
tah-e-jaw....= bottom of horizon, yaani kshitij-tal.
teesari puri line....= But (my) eye-sight is fixed in-waiting right from the origin of the world (ab aeterno, yaani 'anaadi kaal sey) upon the path.
The whole meaning of the 'sher' is also being given as below
(being accustomed as such, being a teacher for almost 40 years):

"There is no body any where upon the road right till the bottom of horizon, but still my eyes (eyesight) are set over there in waiting right from the very origin of the world."
    I hope now it will be understood as such.

                      - abd bundeli

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KOYAL46
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«Reply #358 on: July 16, 2010, 02:09:57 PM »
Raah mai kahin koi nahi hai yahaan se kshitij tak
Tak-taki lagaaye baithee hu aadi-kaal se abhi tak
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #359 on: July 16, 2010, 02:52:57 PM »

Raah mai kahin koi nahi hai yahaan se kshitij tak
Tak-taki lagaaye baithee hu aadi-kaal se abhi tak

Koyal-46 ji!

You've almost very correctly translated my sher! Thanks!

                             - abd bundeli
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