Reply the sher .....

[smardia]

Abd-ji aur koyalji ek koshis meri bhee....


Nahi koi raaste par wahaan tak dharti aur aasmaa milte jahaan
Anaadi-kaal se intzaar mai nazren ruki hui hain ussee rah par

[abdbundeli]

Abd-ji aur koyalji ek koshis meri bhee....


Nahi koi raaste par wahaan tak dharti aur aasmaa milte jahaan
Anaadi-kaal se intzaar mai nazren ruki hui hain ussee rah par

smardia ji! Yah bhi durust hai! Mujhey khushee hai, aapney meyrey eik sher ko itnee tabajjoh dee! Thanks!

                               - abd bundeli

[Rajesh Harish]

Jhukte woh hain jis mein hai jaan
Aka.dh toh hai murde ki pehchaan

[KOYAL46]

Seekhna hai tou in pedon se seekh
Phalon se lade hokar bhi jhukte hain wo.....

[abdbundeli]

Seekhna hai tou in pedon se seekh
Phalon se lade hokar bhi jhukte hain wo.....

'Koyal46' ji! Aapkaa kahnaa sahee hai, par,

Log jhuk jaatey hain apney waqaar sey, leykin,
Husn to husn hai: khushkhwaar hai zameen key liye!
Aap aaneyn to, bin phaloun key bhi jhuk jaayengey
Tamaam ye darakht, khairmaqdamee key liye!!

                        - abd bundeli

[KOYAL46]

Wah wah wah....ABDji.... ye tou kavi k shabd hain jo wo apni mehbooba ko kehta hai....mein tou Prakarti ki baat kar rahi thee.....

Yu tou jhuk jaati hain saari nazarein
Gulshan me unke aane se,Aaftaab hai wo

Jhuk jaati hai phoolo ki tehni bhee sanam
Bhawraa jab baithta hai madhu peene uss par

'Koyal46' ji! Aapkaa kahnaa sahee hai, par,

Log jhuk jaatey hain apney waqaar sey, leykin,
Husn to husn hai: khushkhwaar hai zameen key liye!
Aap aaneyn to, bin phaloun key bhi jhuk jaayengey
Tamaam ye darakht, khairmaqdamee key liye!!

                        - abd bundeli

[abdbundeli]

Wah wah wah....ABDji.... ye tou kavi k shabd hain jo wo apni mehbooba ko kehta hai....mein tou Prakarti ki baat kar rahi thee.....

Yu tou jhuk jaati hain saari nazarein
Gulshan me unke aane se,Aaftaab hai wo

Jhuk jaati hai phoolo ki tehni bhee sanam
Bhawraa jab baithta hai madhu peene uss par

Dhanyawaad Koyal46 ji!

Yah prakruti (kaainaat) hee to meyree mahboobaa hai! Mein to sab ko pyaar kartaa huun! Aapko bhee!
Galt mat samajhiyegaa, 'soundarya kaa upaasak' huun, tabhee to 'is umra' mein bhee noujawaanoun jaisee 'shayari' likh paataa huun!
"Haath-pairoun pai zayeefee hai kaargar; phir bhee,
 Dil-o-dimaag abhee bhee jawaan hai meyraa!"

Ab is 'link' key liye bhee aik 'dohaa' likhnaa 'uchit' hogaa:

Meyraa 'priya' hai har kaheen,
Dhoop-chhaanh-saa saath!
Har kshan uskey haath mein,
Paataa apnaa haath!!

            Ramwatiya / abd bundeli

[KOYAL46]

Tahe dil se shukriaa ABDji......

Dhanyawaad Koyal46 ji!

Yah prakruti (kaainaat) hee to meyree mahboobaa hai! Mein to sab ko pyaar kartaa huun! Aapko bhee!
Galt mat samajhiyegaa, 'soundarya kaa upaasak' huun, tabhee to 'is umra' mein bhee noujawaanoun jaisee 'shayari' likh paataa huun!
"Haath-pairoun pai zayeefee hai kaargar; phir bhee,
 Dil-o-dimaag abhee bhee jawaan hai meyraa!"

Ab is 'link' key liye bhee aik 'dohaa' likhnaa 'uchit' hogaa:

Meyraa 'priya' hai har kaheen,
Dhoop-chhaanh-saa saath!
Har kshan uskey haath mein,
Paataa apnaa haath!!

            Ramwatiya / abd bundeli

[abdbundeli]

Tahe dil se shukriaa ABDji......

You're most welcome, KOYAL46 ji!

Aapkey liye khaas tour par, mein apnee aik puraanee gazal kaa aik sher 'prastut' kar rahaa huun: jis sey aapkey saamney 'soundarya kee wyaapaktaa kaa meyraa sahaj bodh' ujaagar honey lageygaa:

"Mein ney deykhaa hai aisaa naheen kuchh kaheen:
 Jo ki, ho intihaa khoobsoorat naheen!"

Kuchh isee tarah kaa, aik baar auor mein ney likhaa thaa:

"Mein ney naheen kabhee duniyaa mein,
 Kuchh bhee kaheen asundar deykhaa!"

Koyal ji, all HIS creations are beautiful! HE has not created any thing that's ugly!! It's only one's perception that compares and classifies things in various categories!

Ab kuchh laaineyn is 'link' key liye bhee:

Mein ney kuchh deykhaa waheen,
To, un ney kuchh aour!
Yug-yug sey chaltaa rahaa
Hai sansruti kaa dour!!

            - Ramwatiya / abd bundeli

[KOYAL46]

Do sher...kuchh aapki he baat ko kehte huye....

"Jahaan tak pahuchti hain meri nigahen
 Jahaan ye behadd khoobsurat lagta hai..."

 "Maine jab bhi khidki se baahar dekha
 Aasmaa he dekha,na zarra koi jameen ka..."

 

[abdbundeli]

Do sher...kuchh aapki he baat ko kehte huye....

"Jahaan tak pahuchti hain meri nigahen
 Jahaan ye behadd khoobsurat lagta hai..."

 "Maine jab bhi khidki se baahar dekha
 Aasmaa he dekha,na zarra koi jameen ka..."

 

Unkee aankhoun mein utartaa hai shafaq houley sey!
Unkee baahoun mein lahartaa hai samundar gahraa!
Unkee saansoun mein mahaktaa hai khuld kaa dariyah!
Azal sey hai usee manzar pai tasawwur thhahraa!

                                   - abd bundeli

[kameeney]

 NIGAAH JAB BHI UTHTI HAI  SAHAM JATAA HOON.!
 UNKI NAZRON KI KASHISH MEIN THUMM JATA HOOM.!

 JO DEKHA CHAMAN KO TO MUSKURATE HAIN PHOOL BHI.
 ANDAAZ-E-NAZAR AB KUCH-KHUCH SAMAJH JATA HOON.

 UNN TO NAZAR WAFA KI BHI BAMUSHKIL MILTI HAI,
 UNKI NIGAAH KO PAR HAMESHA SHAFFAAF PATA HOON,

 GAHRI HAI NIGAAH UNKI KISI KI GAZAL KI TARAH,
 DOOB KAR NIGAAH MEIN KAI ALFAAZ PATA HOON,

 ZARA BHI PHERE  NAZAR  JO MUJH SE KABHI ,
 ZINDAGI KO KAMEENEY PHIR  KAZAA PATA HOON...!
 
 

[thinkhattk]

Is barish me ham bhig jayenge,
aap sath do to tufano se takra jayenge.......

[kameeney]

 

            khusiun se seunhara pal bana jaye ge
            hum sahra ko gulistaan bana jaye ge

[thinkhattk]

meri khusiya to tujse judi he,
tu agar gulistan me aa jaye to phool khil jaye....