SHAYRI...EITHER FIRST WORD..OR LAST WORD

by @kaash on March 05, 2009, 07:19:14 AM
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Dear frnds,

it's a new game...in this game we can use either the first word
of the sher to make a sher or use the last word
of the sher

the only thing we have to remember that
we should start and end the sher
with a word...
so that other person can make the sher/shayri


here is the first one..

sabab bedili ka jab bhi zindagi se poochha hai
gham na kar haske kaha usne,nahi hoti koi iski vajah
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2009, 01:49:45 PM »
Nice game again...!


Dua hai dil ki doobti kashti ka kinara,
WO ek dene waala hi hai bas aakhiri Sahara
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2009, 02:03:57 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on March 05, 2009, 01:49:45 PM
Nice game again...!


Dua hai dil ki doobti kashti ka kinara,
WO ek dene waala hi hai bas aakhiri Sahara

Sahaara Kaun Deta Hai Parwardigaar Ke Siwa,.
Log Muskuraate Bhi Hai, Yahaan Kisi Matlab Se,.
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2009, 02:16:46 PM »
Azeem,

aapne last word theek nahin diya....Aapka last word hai "Se" aur is lafz se koi sher shuru nahin ho paayega !


Aapko aisa sher likhna hai ki us sher ka last word bhi next user apne sher ki shuruaat main use kar sake.
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2009, 02:22:18 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on March 05, 2009, 02:16:46 PM
Azeem,

aapne last word theek nahin diya....Aapka last word hai "Se" aur is lafz se koi sher shuru nahin ho paayega !


Aapko aisa sher likhna hai ki us sher ka last word bhi next user apne sher ki shuruaat main use kar sake.

Sorry Didi,.

Main Tera Aashiq Hoon ye Bata Tu Jaanti Hai,.
Phir Bhi Meri Jaan, Teri Aazmaaish Mein, Maine Izaafa Dekha,.
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2009, 02:41:08 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 05, 2009, 02:22:18 PM
Sorry Didi,.

Main Tera Aashiq Hoon ye Bata Tu Jaanti Hai,.
Phir Bhi Meri Jaan, Teri Aazmaaish Mein, Maine Izaafa Dekha,.
is main sorry ki kya baat hai Usual Smile

Magar DOH abhi bhi theek nahin  Usual Smile

Maine aapke sher se oppar jo sher likha tha, uski shuruaat DUA se ki hai aur end SAHARA se kiya hai...

Ab aapko koi aisa sher likhna hai, jo ya to DUA se shuru ho ya SAHARA se...lekin aapke sher ka last word aisa hona chhaiye jo ki next member apne sher ki shuruaat main use kar sake !

Thoda mushkil hai, bas shayari seekhne aur sochne ke liye achcha game hai !
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2009, 02:43:46 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on March 05, 2009, 02:40:14 PM
dekhahai dua ko bhi humne roobaru hote
yaaden nahi jalti jalte hain to bus yaadon ke diye



Diye yaadon ke, khoon-e-dil maangte hain
Jalaana bhi mushkil, bujhana bhi Mushkil !!
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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2009, 02:50:19 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on March 05, 2009, 02:41:08 PM
is main sorry ki kya baat hai Usual Smile

Magar DOH abhi bhi theek nahin  Usual Smile

Maine aapke sher se oppar jo sher likha tha, uski shuruaat DUA se ki hai aur end SAHARA se kiya hai...

Ab aapko koi aisa sher likhna hai, jo ya to DUA se shuru ho ya SAHARA se...lekin aapke sher ka last word aisa hona chhaiye jo ki next member apne sher ki shuruaat main use kar sake !

Thoda mushkil hai, bas shayari seekhne aur sochne ke liye achcha game hai !

Theek Hai,.

Mushkilon Se Jo Darna Na Jaane,.
Andheron Mein Wohi, Roshni Pehchaane,. .
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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2009, 03:14:51 PM »
Quote from: @kaash on March 05, 2009, 03:00:47 PM
bahot khoob Azeem..acha likha hai aapne

mushkilen zindagi me imtihaan-e-daur laati hain
inhi me to chhupi hai har kaamyaabi ki shuruaat

Shukriya,.

Shuruwaat Mein Hi Mohabbat Ki, Maine Gham Paa Liya,.
Log Kehte The, Ki Anjaam Buraa Hoga,.
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«Reply #9 on: March 05, 2009, 04:14:53 PM »
shuruwaat kee ek naee zindagee kee maine, tum bhi ho iss mein shaamil...
dareeya bhi paar larlaengay agar ek dafa karlaen tumko haasil...

Quote from: Jaanasheen on March 05, 2009, 03:14:51 PM
Shukriya,.

Shuruwaat Mein Hi Mohabbat Ki, Maine Gham Paa Liya,.
Log Kehte The, Ki Anjaam Buraa Hoga,.
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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2009, 11:11:34 AM »


"Shuruaat" hi hai zindagi ki haqiqat,
Ruke qadmon se nahin mila karti hai Manzil !!
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«Reply #11 on: March 06, 2009, 11:15:16 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on March 06, 2009, 11:11:34 AM

"Shuruaat" hi hai zindagi ki haqiqat,
Ruke qadmon se nahin mila karti hai Manzil !!

Ek manzil ka meri nishaan na mila,
Jo bhi mile raste ho barbaadi ke the...
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«Reply #12 on: March 06, 2009, 11:17:36 AM »
Nice one Shally

Shally, aap ko sher ya to "Manzil" se shuru karna hai, ya phir "Shuruaat" se ..... aur aapke sher ka last word bhi aisa hona chahiye jo next member apne sher ke shuru main use kar sake Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: March 06, 2009, 11:20:17 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on March 06, 2009, 11:17:36 AM
Nice one Shally

Shally, aap ko sher ya to "Manzil" se shuru karna hai, ya phir "Shuruaat" se ..... aur aapke sher ka last word bhi aisa hona chahiye jo next member apne sher ke shuru main use kar sake Usual Smile

sorry dear
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«Reply #14 on: March 06, 2009, 11:21:35 AM »
Zindagi ko kaun samajh paaya hai
Har shakhs ko isne sataya Hai
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