Dasht-e-Wafa Mein Pyaas Ka Aalam Ajeeb Tha

by Mantash on June 06, 2013, 06:14:43 PM
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Dasht-e-Wafa Mein Pyaas Ka Aalam Ajeeb Tha
Dekha To Aik Dard Ka Dariya Qareeb Tha

Guzrey Jidhar Jidhar Se Tamanna K Qaafley
Her Her Qadam Pe Aik Nishaan-e-Saleeb Tha

Kuch Aysi Meherbaan Tou Na Thi Ham Pe Zindagi
Kyun Her Koi Jahaan Mein Hamara Raqeeb Tha

Apna Pata To Us Ne Diya Tha Mujhy
Main Khud Hi Kho Gaya Tou Ye Mera Naseeb Tha
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2013, 06:40:45 PM »
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nyc,...........daad,......
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2013, 07:43:35 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2013, 08:15:00 PM »
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bahut khoob. dheron daad.
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2013, 12:02:06 AM »
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waah waah bahut hi khoob Mantash jee, yuN hi likhte rahiye aur YoIndia pe aate rahiye.
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2013, 12:45:45 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2013, 01:02:59 AM »
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Apna Pata To Us Ne Diya Tha Mujhy
Main Khud Hi Kho Gaya Tou Ye Mera Naseeb Tha
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Wah,Very nice.
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2013, 01:42:20 AM »
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wwwwaaaahhhhhh !!!! umdaah !!! baakamaaal !!! laaajawaaaab !!! jitni taareef ki jaaye kam, jitni daad di jaaye kam !!! aapko bahaut bahaut mubaarakbaad mantash ji !!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2013, 03:07:29 PM »
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bahut khoob mantash ji.. good work.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2013, 03:17:36 PM »
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janaab ye aapka likha nahiN hai, umeed karta huN ki aage se aap copy nahi kareNge aur writer ko poora credit denge, aur nahiN to kam se kam not mine likhenge... iska akahiri sher kuch yuN hai...


Apna Pata To Us Ne Diya Tha Mujhy “MOHSIN”
Main Khud Hi Kho Gaya Tou Ye Mera Naseeb Tha

Aur ye ghazal Mohsin Naqvi saaheb ki hai...!!
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2013, 02:45:54 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2013, 06:59:49 PM »
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sabhi doston ka shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2013, 07:12:39 PM »
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taish bhai pehli baat to ye hai ki mjhe khud hi nhi pata tha ke ye poetry Mohsin Naqvi ki hai kyu ki ye poetry mere dost ne mjhe mail ki thi aur dusri baat agar mjhe pata hota ki ye poetry Mohsin ki hai to mai unhe credit zarur deta kyunki is se pehle mai unki poetry post kar chuka hun unke naam ke saath to bhai aap zyada fikrmand na ho kyunki mjhe khud ki jhuti tareef ka shauk nhi anyway batane ke liye thanks...
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«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2013, 08:00:50 PM »
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nyc sharing,............
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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2013, 06:00:23 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob

KAHAN SAY DHOND KAY LAUN ATA PATA USKA
MUJHAY KHUD APNA PATA APNI KHILWATAUN SAY MILA Applause Applause
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