hamaare sar pe bhii hone ko aasamaan to hai

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baraay-e-naam sahii ko_ii mehar_baan to hai
hamaare sar pe bhii hone ko aasamaan to hai

terii faraaKh_dilii ko duaaye.n detaa huu.N
mere labo.n pe tere lams kaa nishaan to hai

[faraaKh_dilii = large hearted]

ye aur baat ki vo ab yahaa.N nahii.n rahataa
magar ye us kaa basaayaa huaa makaan to hai

alaavaa is ke na kuchh aur pardaa rakh mujh se
fasiil-e-jism mere tere darmiyaan to hai

[alaavaa = other than; fasiil = rampart/wall/barrier]

bichha.D ke zindaa nahii.n rah sake.nge ham dono.n
mujhe ye vaham to hai un ko ye gumaan to hai

[vaham = imagination/conjecture; gumaan = doubt/suspicion]

saro.n pe saayaa_fiGan abr-e-aarazuu na sahii
hamaare paas saraabo.n kaa saayabaan to hai

gul-e-muraad nahii.n sang-haaye-tifl sahii
Gariib-e-shahar kaa aaKhir kisii ko dhyaan to hai

[muraad = desire; sang = stone; tifl = child]
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2013, 02:44:04 PM »
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waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh taish ji kya baat hai .... mazaaa aagaya ye padhkar bht mastam mast gazal share ki hai aapne ... kuch sher to bas yaad reh jayenge ,,,,,

alaavaa is ke na kuchh aur pardaa rakh mujh se
fasiil-e-jism mere tere darmiyaan to hai


bichha.D ke zindaa nahii.n rah sake.nge ham dono.n
mujhe ye vaham to hai un ko ye gumaan to hai
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2013, 02:51:29 PM »
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waah waah.... Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2013, 03:14:22 PM »
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awesome sharing taish ji...
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Quote from: Taish on July 17, 2013, 02:08:52 PM
Shayar- Aqeel Shadab

baraay-e-naam sahii ko_ii mehar_baan to hai
hamaare sar pe bhii hone ko aasamaan to hai

terii faraaKh_dilii ko duaaye.n detaa huu.N
mere labo.n pe tere lams kaa nishaan to hai

[faraaKh_dilii = large hearted]

ye aur baat ki vo ab yahaa.N nahii.n rahataa
magar ye us kaa basaayaa huaa makaan to hai

alaavaa is ke na kuchh aur pardaa rakh mujh se
fasiil-e-jism mere tere darmiyaan to hai

[alaavaa = other than; fasiil = rampart/wall/barrier]

bichha.D ke zindaa nahii.n rah sake.nge ham dono.n
mujhe ye vaham to hai un ko ye gumaan to hai

[vaham = imagination/conjecture; gumaan = doubt/suspicion]

saro.n pe saayaa_fiGan abr-e-aarazuu na sahii
hamaare paas saraabo.n kaa saayabaan to hai

gul-e-muraad nahii.n sang-haaye-tifl sahii
Gariib-e-shahar kaa aaKhir kisii ko dhyaan to hai

[muraad = desire; sang = stone; tifl = child]

wonderful sharing, sir
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2013, 04:14:44 PM »
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Nice 1.
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2013, 06:36:45 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2013, 11:26:49 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 17, 2013, 02:44:04 PM
waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh taish ji kya baat hai .... mazaaa aagaya ye padhkar bht mastam mast gazal share ki hai aapne ... kuch sher to bas yaad reh jayenge ,,,,,

alaavaa is ke na kuchh aur pardaa rakh mujh se
fasiil-e-jism mere tere darmiyaan to hai


bichha.D ke zindaa nahii.n rah sake.nge ham dono.n
mujhe ye vaham to hai un ko ye gumaan to hai


chalo ji aapko pasand aayi sharing itni, to matlab apna kaam poora ho gaya, ab umeed karta huN aage bhi aapka saath yuNhi milta rahega...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2013, 12:46:40 AM »
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Bahut khoob Bhushan jee, nice sharing.
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2013, 03:10:56 AM »
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bahut khoob sharing! carry on!
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on July 17, 2013, 02:51:29 PM
waah waah.... Applause Applause

touhid saaheb sharing pasand karne ka shukriya...!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2013, 07:51:06 PM »
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wah
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Quote from: aqsh on July 17, 2013, 03:14:22 PM
awesome sharing taish ji...

aqsh ji shari pasand karne ka shukriya...
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 17, 2013, 03:26:49 PM
wonderful sharing, sir

bahayaat saaheb, a pleasure it was to share it with you sir...
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 17, 2013, 04:14:44 PM
Nice 1.

thanks mate...
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