Is mohabbat me main akeli thi- Ali Kirmani sahab

by ghayal_shayar on November 20, 2012, 06:41:54 AM
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adaab sabhi ko........

ye kalaam Ali Kirmani ji ka hai........
main ise isliye post kar raha hoon kyunki isko padhkar lagta hai ki ghazal kise kehte haiN.....agar kaafiye par gaur kiya jaaye...to its a tough job.....shayad isse kuch seekhne ko mile........
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na koi khwaab na koi saheli thi...
is muhabbat me, maiN akeli thi...

ishq me tum kahaN ke sachhe the...
jo azziyat thi hum ne jheli thi...

yaad ab kuchh nahin raha lekiN...
aik darya tha ya haweli thi...

jis ne uljha ke rakh diya dil ko...
woh muhabbat thi ya paheli thi...

me zara si bhi kam wafa kerti...
tum ne to meri jaaN leli thi...

waqt ke saanp kha gaye us ko...
mere aangaN mein ek chameli thi...

is shab-e-gham mein kis ko batlaoon...
kitni roshan meri hatheli thi...

na koi khwaab na koi saheli thi,
is mohabbat me maiN akeli thi.........

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shukriya,
TaisH.........
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2012, 07:08:15 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2012, 07:25:17 AM »
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Bahut  pyari  ghazal  hai  , Taish  saheb . Aap  ne  sahi  
intakhaab  kiya   hai . Albatta  matle   ka  pahla  misra
shayed  ghalat  likh  gaya  hai . Doosra lafz  'koi'  khtak raha  
hai . Ho  sakta  hai  main  ghalat  hoon . Aap  check  kar
lijyega . HASAN
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2012, 08:17:13 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 20, 2012, 08:24:16 AM »
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"na koi khwaab na koi saheli thi
is muhabbat me, maiN akeli thi....

Laajawab !  

Nazuk motiyon se piroye hue ehsas jab ghazal ban jate hain tab aise hi karishme hote hain...khoobsoorat sukoon bhari rawani ke saath ye ehsas ek se doosre dil me utarte chale gae..Dili Shukria 'Ali Kirmani Sb' ko itne khoobsurat shahkar ke liye  ..aur Taish sb aap ko bahut bahut shukria is ghazal ko yahaan par share karne ke liye!!

shara 'ainy'  
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2012, 08:46:12 AM »
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Lucky Jee Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab is khoob kalaam se ruberu karane ke liye...
Aur waqai tuf qafiyaa hai... KyuN ke kal hi maiN is kafiye ko lekar bahut
soNcha par mujhe sirf 3 hi qafiye mile iske.. Usual Smile


Par aapki is sharing ne aaNkheN khol dii... Thanks again...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2012, 08:54:56 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 20, 2012, 06:41:54 AM
adaab sabhi ko........

ye kalaam Ali Kirmani ji ka hai........
main ise isliye post kar raha hoon kyunki isko padhkar lagta hai ki ghazal kise kehte haiN.....agar kaafiye par gaur kiya jaaye...to its a tough job.....shayad isse kuch seekhne ko mile........
_______________________________________

na koi khwaab na koi saheli thi...
is muhabbat me, maiN akeli thi...

ishq me tum kahaN ke sachhe the...
jo azziyat thi hum ne jheli thi...

yaad ab kuchh nahin raha lekiN...
aik darya tha ya haweli thi...

jis ne uljha ke rakh diya dil ko...
woh muhabbat thi ya paheli thi...

me zara si bhi kam wafa kerti...
tum ne to meri jaaN leli thi...

waqt ke saanp kha gaye us ko...
mere aangaN mein ek chameli thi...

is shab-e-gham mein kis ko batlaoon...
kitni roshan meri hatheli thi...

na koi khwaab na koi saheli thi,
is mohabbat me maiN akeli thi.........

____________________________________________

shukriya,
TaisH.........



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«Reply #7 on: November 20, 2012, 09:49:29 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2012, 10:29:58 AM »
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nice, thanx for sharing
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«Reply #9 on: November 20, 2012, 10:54:15 AM »
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Behad Shaanaar Lajwab Sharing Taish Ji...
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«Reply #10 on: November 20, 2012, 12:57:34 PM »
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Quote from: vimmi singh on November 20, 2012, 07:08:15 AM
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thanks maam...
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 20, 2012, 07:25:17 AM
Bahut  pyari  ghazal  hai  , Taish  saheb . Aap  ne  sahi 
intakhaab  kiya   hai . Albatta  matle   ka  pahla  misra
shayed  ghalat  likh  gaya  hai . Doosra lafz  'koi'  khtak raha 
hai . Ho  sakta  hai  main  ghalat  hoon . Aap  check  kar
lijyega . HASAN

hasan sahab shukriya, par janaab thoda jehan aur baaNki net se likha hua hai, to galti hona koi badi baat nahi, waise agar kuch gadbad ho to aap v ise coorect kar sakte hain, kyuNki muje isi haal me mil rahi hai ye ghazal har jagah, waise aapne apna waqt diya uske liye maiN bahut shukraguzaar huN, yuNhi saath dete rahiyegaa...
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Quote from: aqsh on November 20, 2012, 08:17:13 AM
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Quote from: shara63 on November 20, 2012, 08:24:16 AM
"na koi khwaab na koi saheli thi
is muhabbat me, maiN akeli thi....

Laajawab ! 

Nazuk motiyon se piroye hue ehsas jab ghazal ban jate hain tab aise hi karishme hote hain...khoobsoorat sukoon bhari rawani ke saath ye ehsas ek se doosre dil me utarte chale gae..Dili Shukria 'Ali Kirmani Sb' ko itne khoobsurat shahkar ke liye  ..aur Taish sb aap ko bahut bahut shukria is ghazal ko yahaan par share karne ke liye!!

shara 'ainy' 

shara sahab, jahe naseeb jo aapko ye ghazal pasand aayi, umeed karta huN, aage bhi aapki pasand ke hisaab ki cheezeN bazm tak pahuNchaa sakuN...
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on November 20, 2012, 08:46:12 AM
Lucky Jee Aadaab!


Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab is khoob kalaam se ruberu karane ke liye...
Aur waqai tuf qafiyaa hai... KyuN ke kal hi maiN is kafiye ko lekar bahut
soNcha par mujhe sirf 3 hi qafiye mile iske.. Usual Smile


Par aapki is sharing ne aaNkheN khol dii... Thanks again...

Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Haan ji sarkar, yahi to farq hai hum jaise nausakhiyoN me aur in jaise ustaadon meN, ab umeed karta huN ki aap yuNhi saath dete raheNgi...
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