Jaun Eliya sahab ki ek ghazal...!!

by ghayal_shayar on December 02, 2012, 07:11:58 PM
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Jaun Eliya sahab apni garam-mijaazi ke liye mashahoor the aur aik hadd taq unke mijaaz ki jhalak unke sukhan meN bhi kahiiN-kahiiN dikhati paDti hai........unka she'r kehne ka ek bohat hi alag aNdaaz tha aur mehfil meN she'r padhna meN to unka jawaab hi nahiiN tha.....

meri sab dostoN se guzaarish hai ke unka kalaam yahaaN post kareN :-

shuruvaat ke liye unki kuch Ghazliiyaat post kar raha huuN :-

mula'izaa farmaayeN


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aKhlaaq na barteNge mudaaraa na kareNge
ab hum kisii shaKhs kii paravaah na kareNge

kuchh log ka_ii lafz galat bol rahe haiN
isalaah magar ham bhii ab isalaah na kareNge

[isalaah=correction]

kam_go_ii ke ek vasf-e-himaaqat hai bahar to
kam_go_ii ko apanaayeNge chahakaa na kareNge

ab sahal pasaNdii ko banaayeNge vatiiraa
taa der kisii baab meN sochaa na kareNge

Gussaa bhii hai tahaziib-e-ta'lluq kaa talabagaar
ham chhup haiN bahare baiThe haiN Gussaa na kareNge

kal raat bahut guur kiyaa hai so ham ai "Jaun"
tay kar ke uThe haiN ke tamannaa na kareNge
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2012, 01:27:20 AM »
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nice n thanx for sharing
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2012, 02:38:02 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2012, 04:46:28 AM »
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nice sharing
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«Reply #4 on: December 03, 2012, 05:14:18 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on December 02, 2012, 07:11:58 PM

aKhlaaq na barteNge mudaaraa na kareNge
ab hum kisii shaKhs kii paravaah na kareNge

kuchh log ka_ii lafz galat bol rahe haiN
isalaah magar ham bhii ab isalaah na kareNge

[isalaah=correction]

kam_go_ii ke ek vasf-e-himaaqat hai bahar to
kam_go_ii ko apanaayeNge chahakaa na kareNge

ab sahal pasaNdii ko banaayeNge vatiiraa
taa der kisii baab meN sochaa na kareNge

Gussaa bhii hai tahaziib-e-ta'lluq kaa talabagaar
ham chhup haiN bahare baiThe haiN Gussaa na kareNge

kal raat bahut guur kiyaa hai so ham ai "Jaun"
tay kar ke uThe haiN ke tamannaa na kareNge

[/b]NICE
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2012, 05:33:58 AM »
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nice sharing
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2012, 06:03:04 AM »
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bohut khoob nice sharing, taish saheb ek ghazal hai elia sb ki shayad apko yaad ho jisme ek shair kuch is tarha se hai ,

samandaroN me hi tashnakaam hun main

aye baan kya tum ab bhi behti ho.

mujhe thik se yaad nahi hai, agar aapke pass ho ye hazal to zaroor post kareN... shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2012, 06:19:22 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on December 02, 2012, 07:11:58 PM
Jaun Eliya sahab apni garam- MIZAAJEE ke liye mashahoor the aur aik hadd taq unke mijaaz ki jhalak unke sukhan meN bhi kahiiN-kahiiN dikhati paDti hai........unka she'r kehne ka ek bohat hi alag aNdaaz tha aur mehfil meN she'r padhna meN to unka jawaab hi nahiiN tha.....

meri sab dostoN se guzaarish hai ke unka kalaam yahaaN post kareN :-

shuruvaat ke liye unki kuch Ghazliiyaat post kar raha huuN :-

mula'izaa farmaayeN


1.

aKhlaaq na barteNge mudaaraa na kareNge
ab hum kisii shaKhs kii paravaah na kareNge

kuchh log ka_ii lafz galat bol rahe haiN
isalaah magar ham bhii ab isalaah na kareNge

[isalaah=correction]

kam_go_ii ke ek vasf-e-himaaqat hai bahar to
kam_go_ii ko apanaayeNge chahakaa na kareNge

ab sahal pasaNdii ko banaayeNge vatiiraa
taa der kisii baab meN sochaa na kareNge

Gussaa bhii hai tahaziib-e-ta'lluq kaa talabagaar
ham chhup haiN bahare baiThe haiN Gussaa na kareNge

kal raat bahut guur kiyaa hai so ham ai "Jaun"
tay kar ke uThe haiN ke tamannaa na kareNge



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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2012, 11:06:27 AM »
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nice sharing...
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«Reply #9 on: December 04, 2012, 03:37:06 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 03, 2012, 01:27:20 AM
nice n thanx for sharing

bahukhandi sahab shukriya yunhi aate raheN mehfil meN...
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«Reply #10 on: December 04, 2012, 03:37:42 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 03, 2012, 02:38:02 AM
waah waah bahut khoob

shukriya sir ji...
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 03, 2012, 04:46:28 AM
nice sharing

hasan sahab shukriya...
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«Reply #12 on: December 04, 2012, 03:38:54 PM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on December 03, 2012, 05:14:18 AM
[/b]NICE

thanks mate...
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Quote from: @Heer@ on December 03, 2012, 05:33:58 AM
nice sharing

thanks heer ji...
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«Reply #14 on: December 04, 2012, 03:40:21 PM »
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Quote from: Aarish on December 03, 2012, 06:03:04 AM
bohut khoob nice sharing, taish saheb ek ghazal hai elia sb ki shayad apko yaad ho jisme ek shair kuch is tarha se hai ,

samandaroN me hi tashnakaam hun main

aye baan kya tum ab bhi behti ho.

mujhe thik se yaad nahi hai, agar aapke pass ho ye hazal to zaroor post kareN... shukriya

aarish sahab aapka huqm sar aankhon pe, aapki farmaaish usi din poori kar di thi humne...
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