Masla phool ka hai phool kidher jaaye ga...

by ghayal_shayar on July 16, 2013, 03:09:26 PM
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Mujhe ye ghazal bahut pasand aayi, par shayar ke naam se waaqif nahiN huN, agar kisi ko bhi iske shayar ka naam pata ho to jaroor bataayeN..!!


Wo to khusboo he hawaaon main bikher jaye ga.
Masla phol ka he phol kidher jaaye ga.

Hum to samajhtay thay k ik zakham he bhar jaye ga.
Kia khaber thy k rag E jaan main uter jaye ga.

Wo hawaon ki tara khana bajan phirta he.
Aik jhonka he jo aye ga guzar jaye ga.

Aakhrish wo bhi kahin rait pe baithy ho gi.
Tera ye piyar bhi darya he uter jaye ga...!
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2013, 04:24:09 PM »
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Ye ghazal muhtarma Parveen Shakir ki hai - aur kuch is tarha se hai...
Woh to khushboo hai, hawaon main bikhar jaae ga
Maslaa to phool ka hai phool kidar jaae ga
Hum tou samjhe the ke ik zakhm hai bhar jaae ga
Kya khabar the keh rag e jaan main utar jaae ga
Woh hawaon ki tarhan khana e bajaan phirta hai
Ik jhonka hay jo aye ga, guzar jaae ga
Woh jab aye ga to phir uski rafaqat ke liye
Mousam e gul mere angan main theher jaae ga
Aakhrish woh bhi kahin rait pe bethe honge
Tera yeh pyar bhi daryaa hai utar jaae ga
Mujhko tehzeeb ke barzhak ka bana dia waris
Jurm yeh bhi mere ajdaad ke sar jaae ga
(Aakhrish = But)
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2013, 04:37:53 PM »
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iqtedaar saaheb aapka bahut bahut shukriya janaaab, waise mere khayaal se ye unki kitaab khusbu ki hi ghazal hogi,, kitaab to main khareed laaya hun par padhne ka waqt nahin ho paaya hai abhi tak... ek baar fir se tah-e-dil se shukriya saaheb...
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2013, 06:00:33 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on July 16, 2013, 03:09:26 PM
Mujhe ye ghazal bahut pasand aayi, par shayar ke naam se waaqif nahiN huN, agar kisi ko bhi iske shayar ka naam pata ho to jaroor bataayeN..!!


Wo to khusboo he hawaaon main bikher jaye ga.
Masla phol ka he phol kidher jaaye ga.

Hum to samajhtay thay k ik zakham he bhar jaye ga.
Kia khaber thy k rag E jaan main uter jaye ga.

Wo hawaon ki tara khana bajan phirta he.
Aik jhonka he jo aye ga guzar jaye ga.

Aakhrish wo bhi kahin rait pe baithy ho gi.
Tera ye piyar bhi darya he uter jaye ga...!


nice sharing and yess mr iqtedar is right its written by late parween shakir.

and sir you will observe the composition and style of ghazal from late parween shakir and dr bashir badr are same .
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2013, 08:05:41 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 16, 2013, 06:00:33 PM

nice sharing and yess mr iqtedar is right its written by late parween shakir.

and sir you will observe the composition and style of ghazal from late parween shakir and dr bashir badr are same .

no sir, I dont completly agree with you, if I go for versatility and the way of expression, I am bound to rate bashir saaheb two notches higher,  but yes at a very basic level we may say that they were on the same track...
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2013, 10:55:25 PM »
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Bahut khoob, nice sharing.
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2013, 10:59:48 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on July 16, 2013, 10:55:25 PM
Bahut khoob, nice sharing.

pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2013, 11:08:19 PM »
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bahut khub
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2013, 11:50:27 PM »
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Quote from: RohanSingh on July 16, 2013, 11:08:19 PM
bahut khub

sharing ko pasand karne ka shukriya janaab...!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2013, 11:36:58 AM »
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bahut khoobsoorat
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2013, 02:04:15 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 17, 2013, 11:36:58 AM
bahut khoobsoorat

thank u sir ji...!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 04, 2013, 03:35:21 AM »
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Bahut Khoob.
Quote from: Taish on July 16, 2013, 03:09:26 PM
Mujhe ye ghazal bahut pasand aayi, par shayar ke naam se waaqif nahiN huN, agar kisi ko bhi iske shayar ka naam pata ho to jaroor bataayeN..!!


Wo to khusboo he hawaaon main bikher jaye ga.
Masla phol ka he phol kidher jaaye ga.

Hum to samajhtay thay k ik zakham he bhar jaye ga.
Kia khaber thy k rag E jaan main uter jaye ga.

Wo hawaon ki tara khana bajan phirta he.
Aik jhonka he jo aye ga guzar jaye ga.

Aakhrish wo bhi kahin rait pe baithy ho gi.
Tera ye piyar bhi darya he uter jaye ga...!
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