Meri Aankhoo Mein Ek Mudet Se

by suman59 on December 13, 2012, 02:53:19 PM
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    Wahmay Saray tery apnay hain
    hum kahan tuj ko bhool saktay hain

    meri Aankhoo mai ek Mudet say
    Qaflay Rutjagoo k tehray hain

    Sir burhana hawaoo say Pocho
    Zaeqay Hijratoo k kaisay hain

    Baaz ouqaat Khushek pattay bhi
    Paaoo perty hain Cheekh Utthtay hain

    ishiq k Khush Gumaan Mosem mai
    pethroo mai Gulaab khiltay hai
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2012, 03:20:13 PM »
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waah boht khub ek do lafz samj nai aye
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«Reply #2 on: December 13, 2012, 04:19:54 PM »
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nice sharing..
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2012, 07:16:59 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on December 13, 2012, 02:53:19 PM
    Wahmay Saray tery apnay hain
    hum kahan tuj ko bhool saktay hain

    meri Aankhoo mai ek Mudet say
    Qaflay Rutjagoo k tehray hain

    Sir burhana hawaoo say Pocho
    Zaeqay Hijratoo k kaisay hain

    Baaz ouqaat Khushek pattay bhi
    Paaoo perty hain Cheekh Utthtay hain

    ishiq k Khush Gumaan Mosem mai
    pethroo mai Gulaab khiltay hai




bahut khoob suman ji..........!
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2012, 07:18:34 PM »
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Suman Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne waaH ...
behad umdaa khayaalaat aur behad khoobsurat ashaar
rahe aapke is kalaam meiN... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe jee.. Humari dheroN
daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2012, 12:46:27 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2012, 04:34:31 AM »
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very very nice
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2012, 05:42:03 AM »
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kya baat hai suman jee
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«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2012, 07:27:46 AM »
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bahut bahut sunder
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2012, 07:31:19 AM »
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bahut khoob suman ji...
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2012, 05:11:15 PM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2012, 06:17:08 PM »
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suman ji bahut hi khoob likha hai
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«Reply #12 on: December 15, 2012, 04:58:31 AM »
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Suman ji bahot achhi aur muassar ghazal kahi hai aapne. Daad qubool farmayen. Kuch lafz andaze se samajhne pade jaise:

Wahmay - wahm ye
Mudet - muddat
tehray - thahre
burhana - barahna
Pocho - puchho
Khushek - khushk
perty - partay
ishiq- ishq
pethroo- pattharon
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«Reply #13 on: December 15, 2012, 05:13:23 AM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on December 15, 2012, 04:58:31 AM
Suman ji bahot achhi aur muassar ghazal kahi hai aapne. Daad qubool farmayen. Kuch lafz andaze se samajhne pade jaise:

Wahmay - wahm ye
Mudet - muddat
tehray - thahre
burhana - barahna
Pocho - puchho
Khushek - khushk
perty - partay
ishiq- ishq
pethroo- pattharon


Thank you Riyaz jee, original author ka likha aisa hi tha. isliye usko edit nahi kiya maine. thank you for the advice jee
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