My take on the famous "Maut tu ek kavita hai..." by Gulzar Saahab

by guptaronkini on January 29, 2013, 04:28:01 AM
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Maut, tu ek mehfil hai...
Mujhse uss mehfil ka vaada hai, milegi mujhko...

Kore panno'n mein, jab adhoore kisse khatm hone ki raah takein…
Puraane lamhon ke ghugroo kaano'n mein shor karein…
Dost, dushman har kisi ki aankhon mein dard ka khauff,
Mere rukne ki chaah, mere jaane ka intezaar
Uss kashmakash mein jab rishte peeche chhoot jayein,

Mujhse uss mehfil ka vaada hai, milegi mujhko...


Maut, tu ek haqueeqat hai...
Mujhse haqueeqat ka vaada hai, milegi mujhko...

Zindagi ki daud mein jab saans phoolne lage,
Kuch haasil karna, aur kuch ga'nvaana ek sa mehsoos ho...
Har ehsaas ek fareb, har vaakya ek dhokha...
Jab sheeshe ke tootne par, chehre ke sau hisse ho jaaein,
Zindagi ke uss khwaab se uth kar, teri aagosh mein jab dam aaye...

Mujhse uss haqueeqat ka vaada hai, milegi mujhko...


Maut, tu ek tanhayee hai…
Mujhse tanhayee ka vaada hai, milegi mujhko…

Kadam rakhte hi duniya mein, jab milta hai shoro gul ka mahaul
Usi bheed mein jab hota hai hazaron khwahishon ka saamna
Rishton ki bauchaar mein, jab ummedon ke bojh tale dabti jaati hai zindagi
Naam, daulat aur shohrat junoon banke jab leti hai quabiliyat ka imtihaan
Tab ek tanhayee dhoondta hai dil uss kshitij ke paar…

Mujhse uss tanhayee ka vaada hai, milegi mujhko…


Maut, tu sirf ek lamha hai
Mujhse uss lamhe ka vaada hai, milega mujhko…

Tez raftaar se chalti hui zindagi pe jab nukhta lag jaye…
Achaanak, saanson ki ladee beech raah katt jaye…
Kabhie to dastak de kar aaye, aur kabhie yunhi bin bataaye…
Uss ek pal mein poora safar jaise ek beeta kal bankar reh jaye
Ek lamhe mein jab zindagi ka rukh badal jaye…

Mujhe uss lamhe ka vaada hai, milega mujhko…




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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2013, 05:20:14 AM »
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nice sharing
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2013, 05:44:09 AM »
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nice sharing

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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2013, 07:05:58 AM »
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Meri nazar me aaj ke daur ke sabse qaabil , mashoor-o-maroof aur nihaayat nafees shayaaron me Gulzaar sb sabse aala haisiyat rakhte hain...main unki qaabil shakhsiyat ke hamesha se qaayal hoon...aur unhe apna rahbar maanti hoon...jis gahraai aur bareek soch ke saath vo apni baat kahte hain ...voh har dil ko unse jodne me kaamyaab hoti hai!
guptaronkini ji, Gulzaar sb ke is behtareen-o-khoobsurat kalaam ko yahaan par humse share karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukria!!
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2013, 09:06:11 AM »
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Kya baat hai bohut achci nazm share ki hai aapne. gulzaar sb ki shayri zindagi ke zindagi ke bohut qareeb hoti hai, unki shayri pdhkar aisa lagta hai jaise ki wo aapki hi kahani bayan kar rahe hoN.
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2013, 09:10:33 AM »
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nice sharing
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2013, 09:17:16 AM »
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Kya baat hai bohut achci nazm share ki hai aapne. gulzaar sb ki shayri zindagi ke zindagi ke bohut qareeb hoti hai, unki shayri pdhkar aisa lagta hai jaise ki wo aapki hi kahani bayan kar rahe hoN.
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2013, 07:26:06 AM »
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guys...yeh nazm maine likhi hai...inspired by Gulzar saahab..unhone likhi thi "Maut tu ek KAvita hai''Maut tu ek kavita hai…
Mujhse ek kavita ka vaadaa hai milegi mujhko…

Dubati nabzon mein jab dard ko neend aane lage
Zard saa cheharaa liye chaand ufak tak pahunche
Din abhi paani mein ho raat kinaare ke kareeb
Na abhi andheraa ho, na ujaalaa ho, na raat na din
Jism jab khatm ho aur ruuh ko saans aae…

Mujhse ek kavita ka vaadaa hai milegi mujhko…

Inspired from this thought I have written ahead...jo aapke saamne rakha hai!
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2013, 08:55:05 AM »
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v.nice sharing
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2013, 08:57:30 AM »
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guys...yeh nazm maine likhi hai...inspired by Gulzar saahab..unhone likhi thi "Maut tu ek KAvita hai''Maut tu ek kavita hai…
Mujhse ek kavita ka vaadaa hai milegi mujhko…

Dubati nabzon mein jab dard ko neend aane lage
Zard saa cheharaa liye chaand ufak tak pahunche
Din abhi paani mein ho raat kinaare ke kareeb
Na abhi andheraa ho, na ujaalaa ho, na raat na din
Jism jab khatm ho aur ruuh ko saans aae…

Mujhse ek kavita ka vaadaa hai milegi mujhko…

Inspired from this thought I have written ahead...jo aapke saamne rakha hai!

wah wah well writtern. why dont you join us. so that we can enjoy more of your creations.

 
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«Reply #10 on: June 27, 2013, 09:42:58 AM »
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badhiya "take" ...
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