tamaam jism hii ghayal tha ghaaw aisa tha (Krishan Bihari Noor)

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Krishan Bihar Noor saahab ki ek Ghazal :


tamaam jism hii ghayal tha ghaaw aisa tha
koyi na jaan sakaa rakh-rakhaaw aisa tha

bass ik kahaanii huyi ye paDaaw aisa tha
merii chitaa ka bhi manzar alaaw aisa tha

woh hamko dekhta rahataa tha ham taraste the
hamaarii Chatt se vahaaN tak dikhaaw aisa tha

kuch aisii saaNseiN bhi lenaa paDii jo bojhal thiiN
hawaa ka chaaroN taraf se dabaaw aisa tha

khariidte toh khariidaar khud hii bik jaate
tape huye khare sone kaa bhaaw aisa tha

haiN daayarey meiN qadam ye na ho saka mehsuus
rah-e-hayaat meiN yaaro ghumaaw aisa tha

koyii Thahar na sakaa maut ke samandar tak
hayaat aisii nadii thii bahaaw aisa tha

bass uskii maaNg meiN sinduur bhar ke lauT aaye
hamaarey agley janam ka chunaaw aisa tha

phir uske baad jhuke to jhuke khudaa kii taraf
tumhaarii simt hamaara jhukaaw aisa tha

woh jiska khuun tha woh bhi shinaakht kar na saka
hatheliyoN pe lahuu ka rachaaw aisa tha

zabaaN se kuch na kahuunga ghazal ye haazir hai
dimaagh meiN kayii din se tanaaw aisa tha

fareb de hii gayaa ‘NOOR’ uss nazar ka khuluus
fareb kha hii gayaa maiN, subhaaw aisa tha
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2013, 02:54:36 AM »
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Bohut khoob taish jee kya umda ghazal share ki hai sabse zyada qabil e tariif hai iska  radeef aur bohut khoobsurti se nibhaya bhi gaya hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2013, 04:01:27 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2013, 04:53:33 AM »
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superb sharing taish jee
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2013, 06:32:44 AM »
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Taish sb, taveel arse baad is khoobsoorat kalaam ke saat aapko yahaan paakar musarrat hui...is behtareen sharing ke liye bahut bahut shukria!!
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2013, 06:48:19 AM »
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waah waah taish ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2013, 07:00:14 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2013, 11:20:56 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: April 01, 2013, 02:44:06 AM »
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Bohut khoob taish jee kya umda ghazal share ki hai sabse zyada qabil e tariif hai iska  radeef aur bohut khoobsurti se nibhaya bhi gaya hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya aarish bhai, jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko sharing pasand aayi, bas aage bhi aap yunhi saath nibaate rahiye...
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«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2013, 02:45:03 AM »
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Applause Applause

thanks for appreciating saini sir... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2013, 02:46:04 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
superb sharing taish jee

pasand karne ka shukriya aqsh ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2013, 02:48:08 AM »
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Taish sb, taveel arse baad is khoobsoorat kalaam ke saat aapko yahaan paakar musarrat hui...is behtareen sharing ke liye bahut bahut shukria!!

shara ji is izzat afzaayi ke liye aapka tah-e-dil se shukraguzaar hun, umeed karta hun yuNhi bazm meN aapse mulakaat hoti rahegi... yuNhi hausla badhaati raheN aap...
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«Reply #12 on: April 03, 2013, 11:38:34 AM »
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waah waah taish ji

shukriya saahil saaheb ise pasand karne ke liye, bas aage v aap yunhi saath dete raheN...
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«Reply #13 on: April 03, 2013, 11:39:17 AM »
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notworthy notworthy  icon_salut icon_salut

aatish saaheb shukriya, bas yuNhi mehfil meN aate rahiye... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: April 03, 2013, 11:39:58 AM »
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bahut khoob

bahukhandi saaheb shukriya hausla afzaayi ke liye... Usual Smile
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