tamaam umr azaabon ka silsilaa tou raha--- Jaan Nisaar Akhtar

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tamaam umr azaabon ka silsilaa tou raha
ye kam nahin hamain jeene ka hausala tou raha


guzar hi aaye kisi tarah tere deevaane
qadam qaadam pe koi sakht marhala tou raha


chalo na ishq hi jeetaa na aql haar saki
tamaam waqt maze ka muqaabla tou raha


main teri zaat mein gum ho saka na tuu mujh mein
bahut qareeb the ham phir bhi faasala tou raha


yeh aur baat k har ched laubali thi
teri nazar ka dilon se mua'mala tou raha


bahut haseen sahi wazae-ehatiyaat teri
meri havas ko tere pyaar se gila tou raha

-----JaaN Nisaar Akhtar
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2012, 02:43:57 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on November 24, 2012, 02:37:46 AM
tamaam umr azaabon ka silsilaa tou raha
ye kam nahin hamain jeene ka hausala tou raha


guzar hi aaye kisi tarah tere deevaane
qadam qaadam pe koi sakht marhala tou raha


chalo na ishq hi jeetaa na aql haar saki
tamaam waqt maze ka muqaabla tou raha


main teri zaat mein gum ho saka na tuu mujh mein
bahut qareeb the ham phir bhi faasala tou raha


yeh aur baat k har ched laubali thi
teri nazar ka dilon se mua'mala tou raha


bahut haseen sahi wazae-ehatiyaat teri
meri havas ko tere pyaar se gila tou raha

-----JaaN Nisaar Akhtar

woow. very nice
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2012, 03:37:19 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
BEAUTIFUL
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Bohut khoob taish jee umda ghazal share ki hai ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 24, 2012, 10:03:24 AM »
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Nice sharing
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Quote from: suman59 on November 24, 2012, 02:43:57 AM
woow. very nice

shukriya sunita ji, yuNhi padhti raheN aur khush raheN... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: November 24, 2012, 02:41:11 PM »
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very nice sharing taish jee
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 24, 2012, 03:37:19 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Thanku sir ji...
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Quote from: aqsh on November 24, 2012, 04:07:27 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
BEAUTIFUL

shukriya mohtarma...
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Quote from: prashad on November 24, 2012, 04:26:16 AM
behtareen

shukriya prashad ji, ise padhne ki jehmiyat uthaane ke liye...
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Quote from: Aarish on November 24, 2012, 05:52:26 AM
Bohut khoob taish jee umda ghazal share ki hai ... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

aarish sahab ye humari khusnaseebi ki aapko sharing pasand aayi, aage v aisi hi sharings karte rehne ki kosish rahegi...
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wah wah dhero dad
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on November 24, 2012, 10:03:24 AM
Nice sharing

sahzada sahab shukriya pasand karne ka kosish rahegi i aage v aisi sharings kar sakuN... Winking
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