ज़िन्दगी से बड़ी सज़ा ही नहीं और क्या जुर्म है पता ही नहीं

by RAJ SOLANKI on September 22, 2014, 08:53:46 AM
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ज़िन्दगी से बड़ी सज़ा ही नहीं
और क्या जुर्म है पता ही नहीं
इतने हिस्सों में बँट गया हूँ मैं
मेरे हिस्से में कुछ बचा ही नहीं
ज़िन्दगी! मौत तेरी मंज़िल है
दूसरा कोई रास्ता ही नहीं
सच घटे या बढ़े तो सच न रहे
झूठ की कोई इंतिहा ही नहीं
ज़िन्दगी! अब बता कहाँ जाएँ
ज़हर बाज़ार में मिला ही नहीं
जिसके कारण फ़साद होते हैं
उसका कोई अता-पता ही नहीं
धन के हाथों बिके हैं सब क़ानून
अब किसी जुर्म की सज़ा ही नहीं
कैसे अवतार कैसे पैग़म्बर
ऐसा लगता है अब ख़ुदा ही नहीं
उसका मिल जाना क्या, न मिलना क्या
ख्वाब-दर-ख्वाब कुछ मज़ा ही नहीं
चाहे सोने के फ़्रेम में जड़ दो
आईना झूठ बोलता ही नहीं
अपनी रचनाओं में वो ज़िन्दा है
‘नूर’ संसार से गया ही नहीं
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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2014, 10:53:18 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2014, 04:07:31 PM »
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वाह ! बहुत ही सुंदर और असरदार ग़ज़ल है !

ढेरों दाद नूर जी !


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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2014, 06:41:24 PM »
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Solanki Sahaab Aadaab ...!

Behad khoobsurat peshkash hai janab bahut umda ...
Is umda sharing ke liye tah e dil se shukriya...

Aate rahiye ... likhate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2014, 06:52:04 PM »
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Raj Solanki ji,

aapse pehle bhi kai kai baar request ki gayi hai ki aap dusron ke likhe poems ko pooraa credit den aur us poem ke niche 'NOT MINE' likh de, kisi aur ki rachnaaon kaa credit khud lenaa thik nahi hai aur yeh YOINDIA ke rules ke khilaaf hai, zaroori nahi ki aap khud ki poems post karein, magar kisi aur ki poem post karte hain to us par original writer ko hi credit den, aur doosron ki likhi poems kripaya shared section mein hi post karein...!!!

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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2014, 05:37:15 PM »
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DEAR RAJ SOLANKI JI,
THIS IS VERY POPULAR GHAZAL OF "KRISHNA BIHARI NOOR" AND TOTALY UNFAIR WITH URDU ADAB. VERY CLEAR INSTRUCTION OF YO INDIA WHATEVER YOU ARE POSTING IF NOT YOUR PLEASE WRITE " NOT MINE " SRI KRISHNA BIHARI NOOR WAS MY RELATIVE HE IS JEM OF URDU ADAB . PLEASE DONT DO THIS AGAIN .   
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