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by piyush_amrit on February 18, 2013, 07:30:49 AM
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छुपे वो उस दिन, कई हीजबो(पर्दों)  में थे ....
हम नहाये उस दिन , कई शराबो में थे ...

उसकी कोमल हथेली , छू गयी मेरे गाल को ...
ताजा कर गयी,  मुझ निढाल(थका हुआ) को .....
यंकी करो , अब वो मेरी बांहों में थे .....
हम नहाये उस दिन , कई शराबो में थे ...

ये रम्ज(राज) छुपा ले "अमृत", जंहा  से ....
की वो हकीकत में नहीं , मेरे ख्वाबो में थे .....
हम नहाये उस दिन , कई शराबो में थे ...
............ पियूष जोशी "अमृत"
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2013, 09:19:04 AM »
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(hijaaboN),(Ramz),(haqeeqat)  bahut achhaa kahaa daad
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2013, 09:19:26 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob...
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2013, 10:21:53 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2013, 11:16:38 AM »
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dhanyawaaddd sabko bahut bahut dhanyawaadd
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2013, 03:39:05 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause NaNaNa NaNaNa
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne piyush ji...!!!

please aap apne khud ke likhe huye posts ' Famous Poets and their Poetry > Urdu Poets' section me naa daalen. Ye section Famous poets ke poem share karne ke liye hai.

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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2013, 04:45:06 PM »
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thank u very much hriday ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2013, 05:37:47 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bhut khub ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2013, 01:05:46 AM »
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bahut khoob
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