perfact ghazal likhne ka tarika read my friends main bhi sikh raha hoo,n

[jeet jainam]

1. Radeef = the rhyme in the Couplet (the last word)
dard minnat-kash-e davaa nah hua
maiN nah achha hua, bura nah hua
The text in red is the radeef of the sher and the ghazal

2. Qafiya = the word just before the radeef. Each couplet or sher uses a different rhyming Qaafiya
dard minnat-kash-e davaa nah hua
maiN nah achha hua, bura nah hua
The text in black highlight is the qafiya of the sher and the ghazal

3. Matla = The first Couplet of the Ghazal which uses a qaafiya in both the misra

4. All the shers of the ghazal (except Matlaa) can only have the Qafiya in the second line of each sher.
jamaa karte ho kyuN raqiboN ko (no qaafiya)
ek tamaashaa hua gilaa na hua

ham kahaaN qismat aazmaane jaayeiN (no Qaafiya)
tu hi jub Khanjar-aazmaa na hua

See the above example. The qafiya appears only in the second line of each sher.
Each Qafiya is a rhyme that matches the original qafiya in the matla of the Ghazal (davaa, buraa, gilaa,
aazmaa)

5. Maqta = The last sher of the Ghazal, which contains the name of the poet
kuchh to paRhye keh log kahte haiN
aaj Ghalib Ghazal-saraa na hua





dosto neeche kuch aksar istemaal meiN aane wale lafz jinme “z” ya “j” ka istemaal hota hai aur jinhe hum log aksar galat likhte haiN likh raha hooN…..



galat……………………....sahi

jindagi………………... zindagi
zanzeer……………... zanjeer
samzh/samj…………….samjh
wazood……………......wajud/wajood
khanzar……………......khanjar
majboot…………….....mazboot
mazboor……………....majboor
wajan…………………...wazn
tuzhe/tuze……………..tujhe
muze……......................mujhe
jalim…………………..zalim
jajbaat/zazbaat ………..jazbaat
uzaala…………………ujaala
jakham ………………..zakhm
naraaj…………………naraaz
wazeh…………………wajeh/wajhe
najar…………………..nazar
jamaana……………….zamaana
zigar…………………...jigar
najariya………………..nazariya
julfoN…………………zulfoN
gazare…………………gajare
najdeek……………….nazdeek
jameen ……………….zameen
jaroori………………..zaroori
aarjoo………………...aarzoo
jehan…………………zehn
janaaja/zanaaza………janaaza

[lovely_charan]

Very informative... thanks for posting this...

[RAJAN KONDAL]

nice bro thanks for sharing

[surindarn]

Bahut shukria Jeet Jee yeh information post karney ke liye.

[Prabha prakas]

Bahut shukria Jeet Jee pathapardashan ke liye

[khujli]

1. Radeef = the rhyme in the Couplet (the last word)
dard minnat-kash-e davaa nah hua
maiN nah achha hua, bura nah hua
The text in red is the radeef of the sher and the ghazal

2. Qafiya = the word just before the radeef. Each couplet or sher uses a different rhyming Qaafiya
dard minnat-kash-e davaa nah hua
maiN nah achha hua, bura nah hua
The text in black highlight is the qafiya of the sher and the ghazal

3. Matla = The first Couplet of the Ghazal which uses a qaafiya in both the misra

4. All the shers of the ghazal (except Matlaa) can only have the Qafiya in the second line of each sher.
jamaa karte ho kyuN raqiboN ko (no qaafiya)
ek tamaashaa hua gilaa na hua

ham kahaaN qismat aazmaane jaayeiN (no Qaafiya)
tu hi jub Khanjar-aazmaa na hua

See the above example. The qafiya appears only in the second line of each sher.
Each Qafiya is a rhyme that matches the original qafiya in the matla of the Ghazal (davaa, buraa, gilaa,
aazmaa)

5. Maqta = The last sher of the Ghazal, which contains the name of the poet
kuchh to paRhye keh log kahte haiN
aaj Ghalib Ghazal-saraa na hua





dosto neeche kuch aksar istemaal meiN aane wale lafz jinme “z” ya “j” ka istemaal hota hai aur jinhe hum log aksar galat likhte haiN likh raha hooN…..



galat……………………....sahi

jindagi………………... zindagi
zanzeer……………... zanjeer
samzh/samj…………….samjh
wazood……………......wajud/wajood
khanzar……………......khanjar
majboot…………….....mazboot
mazboor……………....majboor
wajan…………………...wazn
tuzhe/tuze……………..tujhe
muze……......................mujhe
jalim…………………..zalim
jajbaat/zazbaat ………..jazbaat
uzaala…………………ujaala
jakham ………………..zakhm
naraaj…………………naraaz
wazeh…………………wajeh/wajhe
najar…………………..nazar
jamaana……………….zamaana
zigar…………………...jigar
najariya………………..nazariya
julfoN…………………zulfoN
gazare…………………gajare
najdeek……………….nazdeek
jameen ……………….zameen
jaroori………………..zaroori
aarjoo………………...aarzoo
jehan…………………zehn
janaaja/zanaaza………janaaza

 


boss!!!!!!!!!!!!

jo main apne andaaz me.N tanz karta tha shukr hai khudaa kaa vo baat aap samjh gaye. abb mujhe umeed hai betaa kee aap sahee alfaaz ke saath likh paao ge.

haan kuchh lafz aur main bataa taa chalo.N


    marz---- maraz

    jazbaato.N--- jazbaat( Plural)


    vaffa -----vafaa

    jaffa------jafaa

    jehn----zehn(Dimaag)

    naav(hindee)- kashtee jab ghazal likho toh istemaal karo

    patjhd(Hindee)-- khizaa.N jab ghazal likho toh istemaal karo.

    seyaahee (ink) hindee seyaah (andheraa)-- Roshnaaee jab ghazal likho toh istemaal karo.


main bahr ke havaale se baat nahin kartaa mujhe iskaa ilm nhin hai aur jo ghazal kee jaan hai haan mera concern hai kee ghazal likho kavitaa likho lafz/shabd sahee se likho toh kalaam me.N ek mithaas /chaashnee aur khoobsoortee/ sundartaa aaye geee!!!!!!!!!

[jp]

nice

[sksaini4]

NICE

[nandbahu]

very nice

[jeet jainam]

thanks to all my Yoindia Shayariadab family

[Muhammad Rizwan]

Nice