share yr views about poetry - how can we enhance the standard of poems

[@kaash]

doston its been a long time for me to be here and i am thankful to all.Yoindia is really a platform poems are being recognised and get good exposure.main yehi chahta hun ki aap bhi apni raay zahir karen,harek ki vichardhara ya nazaria alag ho sakta hai par kahne ka maksad/aim adhiktar ka ek hi hai.i really appreciate members who right by their own,khaaskar jo tyaari aur mehnat se likhte hain,hum sabhi ek doosre ki rachnaon se kuch na kuch seekhte hain.jaisa ki hum dekhte hain yahan sabhi prakaar ki categories hain gaming,quotes,songs,different types of poetry.

what i have observed ki poems ko pasand karne vaalon ki bhi alag category hai aur reply karne valon ki bhi aur usi tarah create karne valon ki.

1. kuch log bahut preparation se likhte hain aur apne vichaaron ko bakhubi bayaan karte hain,mainly vo kavita ko kavita ki tarah dekhte hain.

2. kuch title me hi ulajhke rah jate hain ya ye kahen ki title ko content se zyada ahmiyat dete hain.

3.kuch sabhi tarah ki poem likhte hain.

4.kuch ek ya do teen tarah ki poetry karte hain.

5.kuch title ke likhne ke andaaz ko bahut vareeyata dete hain jaise ki letters smaal me hain ya kuch capital me ya kisi sign ko lie hain ya do alfaaz kitne hain kitne tukdon me likhe gaye hain fala fala.

6. kuch sirf reply karte hain

7. kuch sirf poem ke zarie apna message dete hain.

8. kuch continuosly poem submit karte hain

9. kuch kum likhte/submit karte hain

10.kuch sabhi tarah ki poems ko badhawa dete hain

11. kuch ek hi prakaar ki poem ye kahen dard ya ishk shayri pasand karte hai.

12. kuch sirf gaming hi pasand karte hain.

13.kuch sabhi categories me participate karte hain.

14.isi tarah kuch ek age group ke hain

15.kuch unse kum ya zyada ki age group ke hain

16.kuch busiess karte hain.kuch student hain.kuch self employeed/service.

17.kuch yahoo pe kum aa pate hain.

18.kuch regular hain ya hardum hi rahte hain.

19.kuch poem exposure ya creation/aim of poems ko hamesha ke lie likhte hain

20.kuch faqat vaqti taur pe likhte hain.

21.kuch poems ko target poems ki tarah lete hain ki ye kisi ke lie ya tanz karke rachi gayi.

21.kuch married hain.

22.kuch un-married hain.

23.kuch har tarah ki poems ke saath national social global issues par bhi likhte hain ya likhne ki koshish karte hain.

isme sabhi theek hain as kahin na kahin inse poems aur poetry ko badhawa milta hai.

but we have to find out how can we enhance the standard of poems and poem writing jo ki tabhi mumkin jab humsab dil se is baaren me sochen aur apne vichaar rakhen.

thanks

[riyaz106]

Aapne sahi likha Kaash ji, yahan har qism se members visit karte hain jo alag alag taste ke hote hain. Aapne 23 tarah ke members ginaye hain. Inme ek aur jod lijiye. Kuchh aise bhi hain jo apni poem ko post karte hain aur logout kar jaate hain. Kisi aur ki poem se unhen koi matlab nahi hota. Ye meri shikaayat nahi hai. Sabko haq hai wo kisi ko padhe ya na padhe, reply de ya na de ya jise chahe reply de, jise chahe na de. Lekin ye bhi tai hai ke unhe bhi zyada response nahi milta. Bas main itna hi kehna chahta hun ke achhe se achha likhne ki koshish ki jaye jo sabko achha lage. Kavita koi foramality nahi hoti. Kavita zabardasti nahi zabardast likhni chahiye.

[poppoetry]

shocking........

Kehte hai ye duniya rang-birangi hai...toh zayaz si baat hai Kaash ji...iss duniya k log bhi rang-birange hi hoge.....aur hum bhi issi rang-birangi duniya mein aate hai.....gar har rang ko gin ne baithe to bas ginte hi jaayege...