A request from New Writer to Yoindia Shayariadab community

[iAdmin]

Below I received a PM from a new member of community. I feel it is will be better if I share this community in open and let the community decide.

Hi admin..
I am very grateful to be a part of this community.
I had joined this site so that i can get true and honest feedbacks on my writings.
But some members just reply using claps... I know they are encouraging but
they dont give honest feedbacks.but they prefer reading the posts of old members.
It does not motivates a new writer.
New writer wants a proper feedback so that they can improve not an animation of two hand clapping.
So if you could do something regarding this then i will be very grateful to you.
Thank you.

Do you think he is right , do you think we should do something about it , kindly give your views

[malli]

As a member,I feel that giving applause means, we liked the poem and showing our honest and encouraging likings to that particular poem.
Normal way of encouraging everyone. As of me, claps will encourage and emote to write more and more. 

[iAdmin]

I request members to keep this discussion constructive, even I agree that we here try to motivate each other but he is actually asking for something more than motivation, he is actually looking for true feedback, helping him to improve, may be pointing out errors and mistakes too.

[malli]

We can show or help aur point out errors, if any, and try to motivate in our way, but main thing is "Not many New/Old Members take advice in a positive way".

[sksaini4]

iAdmin saheb
jin saheb ne ye pm aapko kiyaa hai main unke is jazbe kee qadr kartaa hoon.par mera ab tak kaa sad experience ye rahaa hai ki bamushkil ek yaa do logon ko chhod kar jinhe bhee maine rai dee hai unhone naheen maanee main aapko yaqeen se kahtaa hoon ki kam se kam do yaa teen baar main har ek naye ke saath ye kar chukaa hoon par jab log naheen maante aur naheen sudharnaa chaahte to fir hamaare paas bhee sirf taaliyaan bajaane ke alaawaa kyaa rah jaataa hai.fir bhee ham koshish karte rahte hain in person main sabko reply kartaa hoon pasand aaye yaa n aaye par yahaan to naye log itne naashuqre hain ki kisee ko reply hee naheen karte sirf apnee hee post karte rahte hain.haan jin saheb ne ye aapko pm kiyaa hai vo mujhe pm kare aur apnee post ke baare men poochhe agar main use responce n karoon to kahiyegaa

[khamosh_aawaaz]

the respected member  is writing in his /her view that he is looking forward for a comments in words insteed of symbolic clapping.and infact every one wants a vocal appause but yes not a negative remarks except a few comments but not focusing the whole poems. i am sure every body will agree with me on this issue.
if this person wishes to have a nice comments on his/ her poems in order to make him expert by mentioning the fault in his said poem is other issue and in that case he should forward his poem to the experts before writing on the thread.otherwise it will be a cause of frustration if his poem will be contiuously commented showing the  error in his poem in open thread by the experts shall certainly discourage him to write futher as i think.
 

[khamosh_aawaaz]

iAdmin saheb
jin saheb ne ye pm aapko kiyaa hai main unke is jazbe kee qadr kartaa hoon.par mera ab tak kaa sad experience ye rahaa hai ki bamushkil ek yaa do logon ko chhod kar jinhe bhee maine rai dee hai unhone naheen maanee main aapko yaqeen se kahtaa hoon ki kam se kam do yaa teen baar main har ek naye ke saath ye kar chukaa hoon par jab log naheen maante aur naheen sudharnaa chaahte to fir hamaare paas bhee sirf taaliyaan bajaane ke alaawaa kyaa rah jaataa hai.fir bhee ham koshish karte rahte hain in person main sabko reply kartaa hoon pasand aaye yaa n aaye par yahaan to naye log itne naashuqre hain ki kisee ko reply hee naheen karte sirf apnee hee post karte rahte hain.haan jin saheb ne ye aapko pm kiyaa hai vo mujhe pm kare aur apnee post ke baare men poochhe agar main use responce n karoon to kahiyegaa

yes at some extend i do agree with SKS

[sarfira]

Admin ji--
mai personaly iss bat par unn members ki soch par ittefaq rakhta hu, jinhe symbolic reply se jada wrinting commnets ki qadr hai--
mera khud ka manna hai ki--
sirf symbolic reply dene ke saath members ko wringing commnts dene chahie-

mujhe lgta hai ki-agr mai kisi ko sirf 1-2 claps wale reply nikal jau to mene uss post ko be-mann se padha aur bas rep dene ki duty nibhai--

by the way its my own thinking--
baaki members ki kya rai hain ye bhi janna chaunga mai-

wese yahan hum kisi members ko reply kaise karna hai iske lie bound nhi kar skte-

par han--
mai old members ke post pr writing coment aur new members ke post par symbolic comnts wale baat par agree nahi krta.

thanx

[BANSI DHAMEJA]

I am also a new member but my experience is different.My mistakes have been pointed out and corrected the same and  I have improved upon. I had been getting due appriciation by way of symbols and otherwise also. Verbal comments have their own value. Senior in this field can guide to improve.I have been very much motivated to write more.I am grateful to all friends here and the administration.

[Azeem Azaad]

Meri ray Mein Written Comment Zyada maine Rakhte Hain,.

[masoom shahjada]

iAdmin Sir
Aap Yoindia Shayariadab par famous sayaro jaise Galib, Allama Iqbal , Ahmad Faraz Jaise Sayaro ki sayari ke liye har page pe koi hyperlink bnake en sabki sayari available karaye.
Thanks

[ripan dev]

admin sir...clapping ke sath written comment bhi hon to jyada achha hai .... par yeh itna bda matter nahi hai maine dekha hai saini ji siddqui ji pm kar new writter ko bahut jyada protsahan dete hai.......jo qabil e tareef hai kuch rachna sirf clap ke  qabil hoti hai unke liye kya kaha jaye.......... aur housla afjai ke liye to comment hona jaruri hai chahe phir wo clapping se hi ho... written comment ho to jyada achha lagta hai........ baki to yahan jo senior hai unki rai leni chahiye ... wahi sahi decision de payenge aapko....


 Regard

ripan dev

[saahill]

dear admin . Clap is alSo motivation of poetry .
And if need sone corection poets always give sujestions and help to every one .

[jasbirsingh]

I feel, everyone has their own judgement to react to any particular poem. As for me, at times I become so out of words, that i just happen to clap only ... coz the poem appeals to me so much that i just could not utter a word in his honor .... the words are no match to his writings ....

Again then, it all depends upon the mood at the time of login.....

Sometimes, I am in the mood of just playing and enjoying the games section .. sometimes, i am in the mood of just writing .... and want to express my tots of the moment ... sometimes, i forget everything when reading to some poem and get lost in his words .... this has happened to me, a number of times and i just could not carry on reading with other poems ...

As yes, I do agree this too that, it all depends upon your gelling with other members .... I Have seen this peculiar thing ... on anyone's post, we just clap, encourage the writer but hardly i have seen anyone replying back in sher to the writer ... this i feel, encourages the writer more ...

If you just notice, Roja, Celmira, Pooja, Sahil, and few other old members just did that and that infact encouraged me to write more in response to the poem ...

Yesterday, i pointed this tooo, when it was a spontaneous reply after reply between me and Roja .... that's the best way to get the best from the writers ...

I am not a writer .. i just write what comes in mind at the moment .. i can never write a word,if i am made to do so ... and Roja is one such great personality i came across which has truly helped me a lot to write ...

I personal request to all members would be :
   Please encourage writers, amateur ones like me, with your comments and smilies, claps, and in any form to bring the best out of a writer ....

As regard to my comment on whether claps are good or bad as a form of encouragement, i feel, it all depends upon person to person and their individual personality .... to some, it may be just clap of hands which boost him write, for some, like my this particular friend, wants to be encouraged in some words ......

And i feel, both are equally respectful and encouraging for any writer ...

Jasbir Singh
hira_company@yahoo.com
Mumbai

[annu_genis]

Hi All,
It's great to see this kind of Involvement from the members, would suggest to create a New Forum and map it to select senior members... so whenever someone wants to get a honest reply / guidance on its poem, he/ she can first share it with the New Forum and later make it public ...
YoIndia is a great platform for all ...we would only make it better by listening to members and working on the feedback. Thanks!