Why even a good poem may not get appreciation or comments?

by Ricky on July 01, 2007, 05:00:19 PM

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«Reply #45 on: February 14, 2016, 12:07:58 PM »

Jubse gye hain wo hume khul ke jina bhi nhi ata...
Kal tak ata tha hasna unki her baat pe aj karke yaad unko rona bhi nhi ata...
Jub tak the wo roj khwabo me bhi mila karte the unse...
Aj ye alam ki humein raton ko sona bhi nhi ata...
Wo the to sath unke sapno ki udaan bhara karte the...
Or ab hume do kadam chalna bhi nhi ata...
Kuch pal ke liye jo hote the jooda machal uthta tha ye dil...
Or ab barso ki judai pe bhi ise tadapna nhi ata...


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